STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:01 am
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This is very fun....Do we need a
graph or chart board to figure out initial partners (and who will change to who
or whom) or will bach's and b-ettes be apparent as time goes on?
You'uns are great!
This is very fun....Do we need a
graph or chart board to figure out initial partners (and who will change to who
or whom) or will bach's and b-ettes be apparent as time goes on?
You'uns are great!
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:01 am
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Will, the Irish-looking lad with auburn hair, dimples and freckles, had noticed Bryanne right away this evening. She had exited her limo just moments before he, and so they had arrived inside the mansion when there weren't too many others around yet.
He thought she was lovely, and well-spoken, and smart.
She had asked Will about himself, and he had replied: "Well, I am from Fredericksburg, Virginia. Lived in the area most of my life. I travel a lot for my job, but I always like coming back home."
"What do you do ......... for a job, that is?" Bryanne asked.
Will explained that his family ran a large, popular and pretty well-established antiques mall in the city. Several members of the family worked the business, and this was one of the treasures he loved about it ......... the family involvement and loyalty. Bryanne could tell that Will truly was passionate about the business, from the way he became more expressive and relaxed as he spoke about it, and about his family.
"And what about you?" Will asked Bryanne. "What do you love to do?"
Bryanne thought for a second that that was a good way to put that, "What do you love to do?", not "What do you do for a living?"
She smiled, held up her feminine, lean but strong hands, and said, "I'm a massage therapist, Will, and ....... yes, that is what I love to do!"
"Ahh," Will mused in recognition. "No wonder you're the vision of health and beauty, then ....... you pay attention to your body's energy, right?"
Wide-eyed and surprised, Bryanne looked at Will curiously, before he laughed lightly and admitted that he did yoga and tai chi, and that she might see him out on the lawn at sunup, if the weather was decent.
Bryanne was finding this red-headed, freckled guy amusing and attractive, and felt he was worth getting to know more. But more and more couples were joining them with each moment, "like Noah's Ark," as she overheard another couple remark teasingly.
To Be Continued............
Will, the Irish-looking lad with auburn hair, dimples and freckles, had noticed Bryanne right away this evening. She had exited her limo just moments before he, and so they had arrived inside the mansion when there weren't too many others around yet.
He thought she was lovely, and well-spoken, and smart.
She had asked Will about himself, and he had replied: "Well, I am from Fredericksburg, Virginia. Lived in the area most of my life. I travel a lot for my job, but I always like coming back home."
"What do you do ......... for a job, that is?" Bryanne asked.
Will explained that his family ran a large, popular and pretty well-established antiques mall in the city. Several members of the family worked the business, and this was one of the treasures he loved about it ......... the family involvement and loyalty. Bryanne could tell that Will truly was passionate about the business, from the way he became more expressive and relaxed as he spoke about it, and about his family.
"And what about you?" Will asked Bryanne. "What do you love to do?"
Bryanne thought for a second that that was a good way to put that, "What do you love to do?", not "What do you do for a living?"
She smiled, held up her feminine, lean but strong hands, and said, "I'm a massage therapist, Will, and ....... yes, that is what I love to do!"
"Ahh," Will mused in recognition. "No wonder you're the vision of health and beauty, then ....... you pay attention to your body's energy, right?"
Wide-eyed and surprised, Bryanne looked at Will curiously, before he laughed lightly and admitted that he did yoga and tai chi, and that she might see him out on the lawn at sunup, if the weather was decent.
Bryanne was finding this red-headed, freckled guy amusing and attractive, and felt he was worth getting to know more. But more and more couples were joining them with each moment, "like Noah's Ark," as she overheard another couple remark teasingly.
To Be Continued............
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:02 am
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Mimi felt somewhat towering over most of the other bachelorettes, but she had had to cope with that most of her life. She found it to be an advantage, however, in the battles for the boys, because she'd discovered over her twenty-some years, that most guys, if you stand a long, tall woman beside a short little cutie-pie, will take Long-Tall because of those long legs and rather domineering presence.
She eyed the men, though, and found there were several who, with her, could see over the heads of the shorties and the medium-height hoi-polloi. They were truly a "cut above," she thought.
The tall ones met eyes quite often . . . Mimi's guess was that they tired of having to bend their necks down to see the average person, as much as the shorties tired of having to stretch theirs up when looking at the talls.
As Mimi was ruminating about heights and smiling politely at the other tall folks in the room, men and women, she noticed the tallest of them all, a handsome brown-eyed manly-man, smiling big and looking right at her. And then he moved toward her among the sea of bachelors and bachelorettes, mumbling something to himself while looking relieved to see her, and then introduced himself as "Jackson."
Mimi felt somewhat towering over most of the other bachelorettes, but she had had to cope with that most of her life. She found it to be an advantage, however, in the battles for the boys, because she'd discovered over her twenty-some years, that most guys, if you stand a long, tall woman beside a short little cutie-pie, will take Long-Tall because of those long legs and rather domineering presence.
She eyed the men, though, and found there were several who, with her, could see over the heads of the shorties and the medium-height hoi-polloi. They were truly a "cut above," she thought.
The tall ones met eyes quite often . . . Mimi's guess was that they tired of having to bend their necks down to see the average person, as much as the shorties tired of having to stretch theirs up when looking at the talls.
As Mimi was ruminating about heights and smiling politely at the other tall folks in the room, men and women, she noticed the tallest of them all, a handsome brown-eyed manly-man, smiling big and looking right at her. And then he moved toward her among the sea of bachelors and bachelorettes, mumbling something to himself while looking relieved to see her, and then introduced himself as "Jackson."
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:02 am
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Awww, Mackey! Now you have me
blushing! Thanks for the kind words. I couldn’t do it without Chip,
Travy, Silver, and you and your wonderful characters and creative ideas.
Love You, S&T
Awww, Mackey! Now you have me
blushing! Thanks for the kind words. I couldn’t do it without Chip,
Travy, Silver, and you and your wonderful characters and creative ideas.
Love You, S&T
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:03 am
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Joel had escorted Rayne into the mansion after they greeted Chris, and Rayne soon knew that she was ready to mingle, not so much for the mingling, but to remove herself from Joel's side.
He just would not quit ogling her!!! Not her face, not her eyes or even her lips as they spoke, but her body. He had given the little wolf-whistle when they first met, and that had at first been cute and flattering, but now it was getting ridiculous!
Joel had gotten each of them a drink . . . a beer for himself, and a gin & tonic for Rayne, but she had no idea that the least amount of alcohol might turn Joel into a horn-dog, pure and simple!
He touched her, he made comments about her "lookin' fine," and his eyes landed on her bosom and bottom more than anywhere else. Rayne was becoming a tad worried, as each time she made her way to another couple or guy or another bachelorette, to converse, he was soon at her elbow, trying to guide her away, and once even trying to kiss her neck as she stood and talked.
Rayne regretted now choosing a tight red dress for this evening, and wished she were instead wearing something loose and flowing and modest. Somewhere along the line, using the excuse of being chilly, she had found a white silk wrap to throw around her shoulders and cover her chest, but still Joel persisted in his eyeballing and his comments.
Rayne had been making hints of facial expressions and gestures to the cameramen, but they seemed more intent on capturing the drama of it all. She was ready at last, to try to find an ABC staffer, producer, or even Chris, whom she knew was in the house with his wife Gwen, after Joel had done something really out of line! They'd been sitting on the large expansive patio among a group of others, all of them chatting and singing and listening to Renee's and Ross's music. Everyone was having a good time, things were jovial and mellow, Rayne stood to excuse herself for a moment, and as she did, Joel smacked her bottom!
He no doubt saw it as a love-pat, but Rayne was mad and had had it!
She turned to face Joel, neck and face blushing with her rising ire, and she said firmly and quietly, with teeth clenched into a smile, "That IS ENOUGH, man! I don't know you from Adam, I am a stranger to you, and you are PIGGISH enough to think it's alright to touch my body??!!" She gave a little tilt of her head as she said that last, as if to emphasize how inappropriate he'd been.
Joel stood, and began to move toward her, when suddenly, a large figure stepped in between them, back to Rayne, and arms extended toward Joel, as if in a football stance, readying for defense, to hold the offense at bay! All Rayne could see was the back of a beige suit, and longish ash brown hair, but she could hear a resonant and restrained deep voice say, "Back off, man............right now, or these hands will speak for me...."
"The Voice" was not raised, it was not strident, it was not choked, it was not vengeful. It was simply matter of fact, strong, and serious.
Rayne looked around the beige suit back, and saw Joel put up his hands in defeat, turn and walk away to the far edge of the patio. Rayne could feel the adrenaline in her begin to speed now through her system, as if freed within her bloodstream, and tears of relief began to well in her eyes.
The beige suit, with "The Voice" attached, turned to face Rayne, and she found herself looking into some of the sweetest, most concerned blue eyes she'd ever seen ......... and the biggest neck, most muscular face, and most solid chest!!!
"You are ......... my .....," Rayne was trying to express how much she felt "rescued" at this moment, but she could barely whisper. "THANK YOU!" she said excitedly, but hushed.
She threw her arms around his waist, realizing then how big he was! Her face was in his chest, and her hands just slightly overlapped behind him. He wrapped his arms around her, too, after a second, and said, "I'm Leo."
Rayne giggled, squeezing him tighter, and said, "Leo the Lion! I'm Rayne!"
OK, S&T, that's it for me for this evening! Happy writing and reading, all!
Joel had escorted Rayne into the mansion after they greeted Chris, and Rayne soon knew that she was ready to mingle, not so much for the mingling, but to remove herself from Joel's side.
He just would not quit ogling her!!! Not her face, not her eyes or even her lips as they spoke, but her body. He had given the little wolf-whistle when they first met, and that had at first been cute and flattering, but now it was getting ridiculous!
Joel had gotten each of them a drink . . . a beer for himself, and a gin & tonic for Rayne, but she had no idea that the least amount of alcohol might turn Joel into a horn-dog, pure and simple!
He touched her, he made comments about her "lookin' fine," and his eyes landed on her bosom and bottom more than anywhere else. Rayne was becoming a tad worried, as each time she made her way to another couple or guy or another bachelorette, to converse, he was soon at her elbow, trying to guide her away, and once even trying to kiss her neck as she stood and talked.
Rayne regretted now choosing a tight red dress for this evening, and wished she were instead wearing something loose and flowing and modest. Somewhere along the line, using the excuse of being chilly, she had found a white silk wrap to throw around her shoulders and cover her chest, but still Joel persisted in his eyeballing and his comments.
Rayne had been making hints of facial expressions and gestures to the cameramen, but they seemed more intent on capturing the drama of it all. She was ready at last, to try to find an ABC staffer, producer, or even Chris, whom she knew was in the house with his wife Gwen, after Joel had done something really out of line! They'd been sitting on the large expansive patio among a group of others, all of them chatting and singing and listening to Renee's and Ross's music. Everyone was having a good time, things were jovial and mellow, Rayne stood to excuse herself for a moment, and as she did, Joel smacked her bottom!
He no doubt saw it as a love-pat, but Rayne was mad and had had it!
She turned to face Joel, neck and face blushing with her rising ire, and she said firmly and quietly, with teeth clenched into a smile, "That IS ENOUGH, man! I don't know you from Adam, I am a stranger to you, and you are PIGGISH enough to think it's alright to touch my body??!!" She gave a little tilt of her head as she said that last, as if to emphasize how inappropriate he'd been.
Joel stood, and began to move toward her, when suddenly, a large figure stepped in between them, back to Rayne, and arms extended toward Joel, as if in a football stance, readying for defense, to hold the offense at bay! All Rayne could see was the back of a beige suit, and longish ash brown hair, but she could hear a resonant and restrained deep voice say, "Back off, man............right now, or these hands will speak for me...."
"The Voice" was not raised, it was not strident, it was not choked, it was not vengeful. It was simply matter of fact, strong, and serious.
Rayne looked around the beige suit back, and saw Joel put up his hands in defeat, turn and walk away to the far edge of the patio. Rayne could feel the adrenaline in her begin to speed now through her system, as if freed within her bloodstream, and tears of relief began to well in her eyes.
The beige suit, with "The Voice" attached, turned to face Rayne, and she found herself looking into some of the sweetest, most concerned blue eyes she'd ever seen ......... and the biggest neck, most muscular face, and most solid chest!!!
"You are ......... my .....," Rayne was trying to express how much she felt "rescued" at this moment, but she could barely whisper. "THANK YOU!" she said excitedly, but hushed.
She threw her arms around his waist, realizing then how big he was! Her face was in his chest, and her hands just slightly overlapped behind him. He wrapped his arms around her, too, after a second, and said, "I'm Leo."
Rayne giggled, squeezing him tighter, and said, "Leo the Lion! I'm Rayne!"
OK, S&T, that's it for me for this evening! Happy writing and reading, all!
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:03 am
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Super, glad you are having fun! It may be hard to keep track of everyone at this point, but as the numbers dwindle, you will get to know the characters. Time for a True Confession: We writers do have a “cheat sheet” or we’d never keep them straight ourselves! LOL!
Silver, I love Leo and Rayne! S&T
As the hour grew late, Chris Harrison, having recovered from his personal crisis of the evening, reappeared. He assumed his usual calm demeanor and addressed everyone gathered in the living room. “I hope that you have each used your time well tonight, getting to know the other Bachelors and Bachelorettes. I’m sure you’ve all been wondering how it will be determined who will stay and who will go. Actually, you will decide. Each gentleman will be given 15 red long-stemmed roses. You will give one to each of the 15 ladies who
has impressed you most tonight. Ladies, you will be given 15 white rose boutonnieres. You will hand them out to the 15 men who have impressed you the most. Chris pressed a button and the wall opened, revealing the necessary roses to fill the assignment, separated into bunches of 15. “Your roses are ready. Everyone will have a half hour to hand out all of their 15 roses. Let me be clear: You must hand out all of your roses and you may only give one rose to a person. Oh, one more important thing. The four gentlemen and the four ladies who receive the least number of roses will be leaving here tonight. Good luck, everyone! If you arrived in the first limo, you may come and get your roses.”
To Be Continued . . .
Super, glad you are having fun! It may be hard to keep track of everyone at this point, but as the numbers dwindle, you will get to know the characters. Time for a True Confession: We writers do have a “cheat sheet” or we’d never keep them straight ourselves! LOL!
Silver, I love Leo and Rayne! S&T
As the hour grew late, Chris Harrison, having recovered from his personal crisis of the evening, reappeared. He assumed his usual calm demeanor and addressed everyone gathered in the living room. “I hope that you have each used your time well tonight, getting to know the other Bachelors and Bachelorettes. I’m sure you’ve all been wondering how it will be determined who will stay and who will go. Actually, you will decide. Each gentleman will be given 15 red long-stemmed roses. You will give one to each of the 15 ladies who
has impressed you most tonight. Ladies, you will be given 15 white rose boutonnieres. You will hand them out to the 15 men who have impressed you the most. Chris pressed a button and the wall opened, revealing the necessary roses to fill the assignment, separated into bunches of 15. “Your roses are ready. Everyone will have a half hour to hand out all of their 15 roses. Let me be clear: You must hand out all of your roses and you may only give one rose to a person. Oh, one more important thing. The four gentlemen and the four ladies who receive the least number of roses will be leaving here tonight. Good luck, everyone! If you arrived in the first limo, you may come and get your roses.”
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:05 am
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A half an hour later, Chris reappeared. The ladies were standing on his left . . . the gentlemen on his right. They were arranged in a large rainbow from those who had received the most roses and looked like they were holding a bouquet, standing on the far left and right, to those 8 who had received the least roses, standing in the middle. It would have been 10 guests leaving, but since Lucy-Lynn and Brian had already departed, the number to go home was lowered to 8. Without drawing attention to the number of roses received, Chris
tactfully began with the ladies. Mary, Sandy, Mary Ann, Marsha, Walter, Joel, Tommy, and Paul, I’m sorry to tell you that you have received the least roses and, therefore, will be leaving us tonight. However, as I said earlier this evening, Bachelor Survivor will have some great prizes, including parting gifts. Therefore, the eight of you leaving will not be going home quite yet. You will all be spending the next 5 days enjoying an all expenses paid stay at Disneyland.” The Bachelors and Bachelorettes who were leaving suddenly felt much better about their fates and the ones staying congratulated them with hoots and cheers. Chris continued, “Limos are now waiting to take you and your belongings to the luxurious Disney’s Grand California Hotel & Spa on the grounds of Disneyland. It’s time to say your goodbyes.”
As they rode away together in a stretch limousine, the 8 young men and women, leaving the show drank a toast to Chris Harrison and ABC. They were thrilled to be compensated so handsomely for their brief stint on Bachelor Survivor!
To Be Continued . . .
A half an hour later, Chris reappeared. The ladies were standing on his left . . . the gentlemen on his right. They were arranged in a large rainbow from those who had received the most roses and looked like they were holding a bouquet, standing on the far left and right, to those 8 who had received the least roses, standing in the middle. It would have been 10 guests leaving, but since Lucy-Lynn and Brian had already departed, the number to go home was lowered to 8. Without drawing attention to the number of roses received, Chris
tactfully began with the ladies. Mary, Sandy, Mary Ann, Marsha, Walter, Joel, Tommy, and Paul, I’m sorry to tell you that you have received the least roses and, therefore, will be leaving us tonight. However, as I said earlier this evening, Bachelor Survivor will have some great prizes, including parting gifts. Therefore, the eight of you leaving will not be going home quite yet. You will all be spending the next 5 days enjoying an all expenses paid stay at Disneyland.” The Bachelors and Bachelorettes who were leaving suddenly felt much better about their fates and the ones staying congratulated them with hoots and cheers. Chris continued, “Limos are now waiting to take you and your belongings to the luxurious Disney’s Grand California Hotel & Spa on the grounds of Disneyland. It’s time to say your goodbyes.”
As they rode away together in a stretch limousine, the 8 young men and women, leaving the show drank a toast to Chris Harrison and ABC. They were thrilled to be compensated so handsomely for their brief stint on Bachelor Survivor!
To Be Continued . . .
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:05 am
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Awesome twist, S&T! I'm finding
this more exciting and cathartic, really, than I expected. It may turn out to
be just what I have needed!
xoxo
Awesome twist, S&T! I'm finding
this more exciting and cathartic, really, than I expected. It may turn out to
be just what I have needed!
xoxo
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:06 am
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Ah, yes, Silver, our writing does soothe the soul, doesn’t it?
Inside the Mansion, 40 glasses were raised for a toast made by Chris Harrison. “Ladies and Gentlemen, Congratulations on making it through your first Cocktail Party on Bachelor
Survivor! But the evening is not over yet.” Around the room, smiles froze, breathes stopped, eyebrows raised in surprise, and mouths dropped. “Tonight you will all be traveling to the real location for our show, beautiful Coronado Island in San Diego, California. The ladies will occupy a Villa on the hotel grounds on the South side of the property. The men’s Villa will be on the North side. Please understand right now that no unauthorized visits to the other Villa will be tolerated. We ask you to respect this rule in the spirit of fairness and safety for all. The penalty for violating this rule will be ejection from the show. In Survivor terms, just consider one Villa for the Women’s Tribe and the other for the Men’s Tribe! Now raise your glasses and here’s to a season of love!” Glasses clinked, sips were taken, cheers rang out! Chris then announced, “Ladies, you will be leaving for the airport now, with my wife, Gwen. All of your luggage is already aboard the chartered plane that will take you to San Diego. Enjoy your flight!” Once the women had left the mansion on their bus to the airport, Chris told the men, “I know it’s been a long evening for you, but we can rest on the plane and we’ll be in San Diego before we know it. Let’s go guys!” The men left the Mansion and boarded their own bus to the airport that would take them to their own chartered flight. They had seen the last of the Bachelorettes for a couple of days.
To Be Continued . . .
Ah, yes, Silver, our writing does soothe the soul, doesn’t it?
Inside the Mansion, 40 glasses were raised for a toast made by Chris Harrison. “Ladies and Gentlemen, Congratulations on making it through your first Cocktail Party on Bachelor
Survivor! But the evening is not over yet.” Around the room, smiles froze, breathes stopped, eyebrows raised in surprise, and mouths dropped. “Tonight you will all be traveling to the real location for our show, beautiful Coronado Island in San Diego, California. The ladies will occupy a Villa on the hotel grounds on the South side of the property. The men’s Villa will be on the North side. Please understand right now that no unauthorized visits to the other Villa will be tolerated. We ask you to respect this rule in the spirit of fairness and safety for all. The penalty for violating this rule will be ejection from the show. In Survivor terms, just consider one Villa for the Women’s Tribe and the other for the Men’s Tribe! Now raise your glasses and here’s to a season of love!” Glasses clinked, sips were taken, cheers rang out! Chris then announced, “Ladies, you will be leaving for the airport now, with my wife, Gwen. All of your luggage is already aboard the chartered plane that will take you to San Diego. Enjoy your flight!” Once the women had left the mansion on their bus to the airport, Chris told the men, “I know it’s been a long evening for you, but we can rest on the plane and we’ll be in San Diego before we know it. Let’s go guys!” The men left the Mansion and boarded their own bus to the airport that would take them to their own chartered flight. They had seen the last of the Bachelorettes for a couple of days.
To Be Continued . . .
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On Monday night when the Bachelors and Bachelorettes arrived at their respective Villas, they were all so exhausted, they each fell into the first empty bed they could find.
On the plane, Chris had supplied additional information, in person to the men, and by video to the ladies. He told them, “I know that it’s been a huge evening for everyone, so I’m happy to tell you that tomorrow you can all sleep in as late as you like. It will be a complete day of rest. Just get settled into your rooms, unpack, get to know the others a bit, lounge by the pool, and relax. You may go out on the personal beach provided for your Villa, but please do not explore the property any further. This means the women will spend a day with the women and the men will be with the men. On Wednesday morning, I’ll be arriving at your respective Villas to fill you in on what lies ahead.”
In the wee hours of Tuesday morning, 40 exhausted Bachelors and Bachelorettes were sound asleep.
To Be Continued . . .
On Monday night when the Bachelors and Bachelorettes arrived at their respective Villas, they were all so exhausted, they each fell into the first empty bed they could find.
On the plane, Chris had supplied additional information, in person to the men, and by video to the ladies. He told them, “I know that it’s been a huge evening for everyone, so I’m happy to tell you that tomorrow you can all sleep in as late as you like. It will be a complete day of rest. Just get settled into your rooms, unpack, get to know the others a bit, lounge by the pool, and relax. You may go out on the personal beach provided for your Villa, but please do not explore the property any further. This means the women will spend a day with the women and the men will be with the men. On Wednesday morning, I’ll be arriving at your respective Villas to fill you in on what lies ahead.”
In the wee hours of Tuesday morning, 40 exhausted Bachelors and Bachelorettes were sound asleep.
To Be Continued . . .
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On Tuesday, most of the cast of Bachelor Survivor slept past noon, gradually awaking in a place they did not know and remembering just as gradually why they were there. Carrie stretched, thinking of Charlie with a smile. She was so glad they had been savvy enough to make an alliance and knowing how handy it would be, now that they were divided into Men’s and Women’s Tribes. Charlie was smart! And they had been lucky, too! Given the first Individual Immunities ever and no one else even knew about it! Lucky number 25! That got her thinking. I wonder if there is a Hidden Immunity Idol somewhere around the Women’s Villa? Carried jumped out of bed. She found the nearest bathroom, took a quick shower, threw on a bathing suit, and brushed her teeth. She’d forget about make-up today and let her hair dry naturally. She headed for the kitchen. That coffee smelled heavenly and she needed some breakfast before she began her search.
To Be Continued . . .
On Tuesday, most of the cast of Bachelor Survivor slept past noon, gradually awaking in a place they did not know and remembering just as gradually why they were there. Carrie stretched, thinking of Charlie with a smile. She was so glad they had been savvy enough to make an alliance and knowing how handy it would be, now that they were divided into Men’s and Women’s Tribes. Charlie was smart! And they had been lucky, too! Given the first Individual Immunities ever and no one else even knew about it! Lucky number 25! That got her thinking. I wonder if there is a Hidden Immunity Idol somewhere around the Women’s Villa? Carried jumped out of bed. She found the nearest bathroom, took a quick shower, threw on a bathing suit, and brushed her teeth. She’d forget about make-up today and let her hair dry naturally. She headed for the kitchen. That coffee smelled heavenly and she needed some breakfast before she began her search.
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:26 pm
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Each Villa was set up with a living room area, a kitchen and sunroom, a powder room and a laundry, and three wings set off this common room area that each held a two-bedroom suite. Each suite had it’s own sitting room and a bathroom. The twenty guests in each Villa had only been looking for a bed the night before. Now they had an opportunity to tour the house, and over the course of their day of leisure, permanent roommates were selected and everyone moved in with their new friends. With six bedrooms and twenty guests in each house, after all of the relocating and unpacking, most bedrooms ended up with three or four roommates. Outside there was a private swimming pool and a private beach. It looked like ABC had thought of everything!
(Readers: If you want to see what these Villas really look like – check out the Coronado Hotel in San Diego site for their 3 bedroom villas – online – we’ve used our imagination to turn them into a 6 bedroom version. They are gorgeous and defy description – so take a look!)
To Be Continued . . .
Each Villa was set up with a living room area, a kitchen and sunroom, a powder room and a laundry, and three wings set off this common room area that each held a two-bedroom suite. Each suite had it’s own sitting room and a bathroom. The twenty guests in each Villa had only been looking for a bed the night before. Now they had an opportunity to tour the house, and over the course of their day of leisure, permanent roommates were selected and everyone moved in with their new friends. With six bedrooms and twenty guests in each house, after all of the relocating and unpacking, most bedrooms ended up with three or four roommates. Outside there was a private swimming pool and a private beach. It looked like ABC had thought of everything!
(Readers: If you want to see what these Villas really look like – check out the Coronado Hotel in San Diego site for their 3 bedroom villas – online – we’ve used our imagination to turn them into a 6 bedroom version. They are gorgeous and defy description – so take a look!)
To Be Continued . . .
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Re: STORYTIME: BACHELOR SURVIVOR
by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:26 pm
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Hi you wonderful, wonderful
writers....can't wait to read this. I've been sick for three
days....turned out to be food poisoning...yuck...even had to go to the
hospital...threw up so much got IV and meds....feel much better....so now I
need to start at the beginning and read this....I'm going to do that now and
come back later....Thank you, Thank you, Thank you....finally something to read
beside Jake and Vienna! Love you talented ladies.....Izzy
Hi you wonderful, wonderful
writers....can't wait to read this. I've been sick for three
days....turned out to be food poisoning...yuck...even had to go to the
hospital...threw up so much got IV and meds....feel much better....so now I
need to start at the beginning and read this....I'm going to do that now and
come back later....Thank you, Thank you, Thank you....finally something to read
beside Jake and Vienna! Love you talented ladies.....Izzy
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:28 pm
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Awww, Izzy! So sorry to hear you have been so sick! That is scary! What in the world did you eat? I hope our story gives you some recovery time fun. We’ve missed you, S&T
When Carrie arrived in the kitchen, she was amazed at the breakfast buffet that had been cooked and laid out for the women. Jennarosa and Penina had been up for a while and prepared a chafing dish of scrambled eggs and one of oatmeal, bacon was keeping warm over a heating tray, a cinnamon streusel coffeecake was drizzled with confectioner’s frosting. In addition, there were a variety of cold cereals, bagels, toast, cream cheeses and jams, as well as pitchers of milk and chilled orange, apple, or carrot juice. A huge pot of coffee was ready and waiting, beside a large carafe of hot water. “You two are absolutely amazing! I love you!” said Carrie, to the twins who were now enjoying a final cup of tea. “Thank you so much!” “It’s our pleasure, Carrie,” said Jennarosa. “We just ask that you scrape your dishes, rinse them, and put them in the dishwasher when you’re done!” added Penina. “You sound like my mother,” joked Carrie. “But, that’s not a problem. I’m even pretty good at scrubbing pots, if you need a volunteer.” The twins smiled. “We may take you up on that!” Jenny replied. Carrie filled a plate with eggs and bacon, and made herself a slice of whole wheat toast. She poured a large glass of orange juice, something she had every day and considered her “eye opener,” as well as a cup of coffee, and sat down with the twins. “How long have you been up?” she asked, looking at her watch and seeing it was now 1:30PM. “Boy, it sure felt good to sleep!” “Jenny laughed, “It sure did. We’ve only been up for about an hour.” She and Penny were still in their shortie pajamas. “Have you had a chance to check out the house, yet?” asked Penny. Carrie held her finger up, while she swallowed the bite in her mouth. “This is really good, ladies! No, I just got up myself. That shower is great! It has four different shower heads. I feel like I just had a massage. I can’t wait to see everything.” Several other girls arrived at the kitchen in various states of dress. “Umm, that smells good!” “I’m starving!” “Thank goodness for Jennarosa and Penina!”
To Be Continued . . .
Awww, Izzy! So sorry to hear you have been so sick! That is scary! What in the world did you eat? I hope our story gives you some recovery time fun. We’ve missed you, S&T
When Carrie arrived in the kitchen, she was amazed at the breakfast buffet that had been cooked and laid out for the women. Jennarosa and Penina had been up for a while and prepared a chafing dish of scrambled eggs and one of oatmeal, bacon was keeping warm over a heating tray, a cinnamon streusel coffeecake was drizzled with confectioner’s frosting. In addition, there were a variety of cold cereals, bagels, toast, cream cheeses and jams, as well as pitchers of milk and chilled orange, apple, or carrot juice. A huge pot of coffee was ready and waiting, beside a large carafe of hot water. “You two are absolutely amazing! I love you!” said Carrie, to the twins who were now enjoying a final cup of tea. “Thank you so much!” “It’s our pleasure, Carrie,” said Jennarosa. “We just ask that you scrape your dishes, rinse them, and put them in the dishwasher when you’re done!” added Penina. “You sound like my mother,” joked Carrie. “But, that’s not a problem. I’m even pretty good at scrubbing pots, if you need a volunteer.” The twins smiled. “We may take you up on that!” Jenny replied. Carrie filled a plate with eggs and bacon, and made herself a slice of whole wheat toast. She poured a large glass of orange juice, something she had every day and considered her “eye opener,” as well as a cup of coffee, and sat down with the twins. “How long have you been up?” she asked, looking at her watch and seeing it was now 1:30PM. “Boy, it sure felt good to sleep!” “Jenny laughed, “It sure did. We’ve only been up for about an hour.” She and Penny were still in their shortie pajamas. “Have you had a chance to check out the house, yet?” asked Penny. Carrie held her finger up, while she swallowed the bite in her mouth. “This is really good, ladies! No, I just got up myself. That shower is great! It has four different shower heads. I feel like I just had a massage. I can’t wait to see everything.” Several other girls arrived at the kitchen in various states of dress. “Umm, that smells good!” “I’m starving!” “Thank goodness for Jennarosa and Penina!”
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:55 pm
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Tks S&T...we went out and I had
spaghetti and meatballs and a salad.....earlier in the day I had a turkey on rye
sandwich...don't know if it was the meats or the salads....that's what the
doctor said....anyway...I'm much better and tks so much for your concern.
Oh my Lord...I'm already
LOL....S&T, I can see Walter (and then Mary-Margaret) looking at the potted
plant instead to each other....so funny...then we find out it's a fake potted
plant...and now we have the twins back...oh boy! Love the twins.
Drama already....Mackey...could that pilot be one with the initials J.P. and I
wonder who this Lucy-Lynn could be! Great job. Silver, you
have found someone for your Mimi...I'm anxious to see if a romance develops
between Jackson and Mimi. Mackey....I hope you bring back that handsome
Brian, the FBI agent...sounds like what Mary-Margaret needs and I can see our
guy Mark and gal Marlee riding off into the sunset on their horses overlooking
the buffalo......see, I'm already making them our own.
S&T....I love your details that
goes with the story line...the way they dress, what they are wearing adds so
much to the story...I really get to know characters and begin cheering for
them.....
Okay, looking forward to reading
more....love you all.....Izzy (oh yeah, I saw someone has DIMPLES! Good
job, DIMPLES are so important!
Tks S&T...we went out and I had
spaghetti and meatballs and a salad.....earlier in the day I had a turkey on rye
sandwich...don't know if it was the meats or the salads....that's what the
doctor said....anyway...I'm much better and tks so much for your concern.
Oh my Lord...I'm already
LOL....S&T, I can see Walter (and then Mary-Margaret) looking at the potted
plant instead to each other....so funny...then we find out it's a fake potted
plant...and now we have the twins back...oh boy! Love the twins.
Drama already....Mackey...could that pilot be one with the initials J.P. and I
wonder who this Lucy-Lynn could be! Great job. Silver, you
have found someone for your Mimi...I'm anxious to see if a romance develops
between Jackson and Mimi. Mackey....I hope you bring back that handsome
Brian, the FBI agent...sounds like what Mary-Margaret needs and I can see our
guy Mark and gal Marlee riding off into the sunset on their horses overlooking
the buffalo......see, I'm already making them our own.
S&T....I love your details that
goes with the story line...the way they dress, what they are wearing adds so
much to the story...I really get to know characters and begin cheering for
them.....
Okay, looking forward to reading
more....love you all.....Izzy (oh yeah, I saw someone has DIMPLES! Good
job, DIMPLES are so important!
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:57 pm
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Awww, Izzy! Gotta love those dimples! Boy, you have some of those characters, down pat! Ha! Hopefully, Walter will have better luck at Disneyland with Mary Ann or Sandy! Lubs, S&T
Emily, Mehreen, Faith, and Amy woke up to a beautiful, sunny day. They had decided on the chartered flight that they wanted to room together and had been fortunate to find an empty bedroom the night before. “Oh, what a gorgeous day!” cried Emily. “I can’t wait to get some rays!” “Well, I’m game for some sun, as long as I have my sunblock,” Mehreen stated. “I’d love to get out in the fresh air,” added Faith. “Sounds good to me,” agreed Amy. “Let’s put our suits on, find something to eat, and get out to that beautiful pool!” she
added, opening the blinds, and pointing to the glimmering blue water extending an invitation.”
To Be Continued . . .
Awww, Izzy! Gotta love those dimples! Boy, you have some of those characters, down pat! Ha! Hopefully, Walter will have better luck at Disneyland with Mary Ann or Sandy! Lubs, S&T
Emily, Mehreen, Faith, and Amy woke up to a beautiful, sunny day. They had decided on the chartered flight that they wanted to room together and had been fortunate to find an empty bedroom the night before. “Oh, what a gorgeous day!” cried Emily. “I can’t wait to get some rays!” “Well, I’m game for some sun, as long as I have my sunblock,” Mehreen stated. “I’d love to get out in the fresh air,” added Faith. “Sounds good to me,” agreed Amy. “Let’s put our suits on, find something to eat, and get out to that beautiful pool!” she
added, opening the blinds, and pointing to the glimmering blue water extending an invitation.”
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:58 pm
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Meanwhile, in the Men’s Villa, a bunch of guys were coming to a similar decision. “Let’s get some rays!” cried Cliff. About half of the men were in the kitchen. Joe had provided a less diverse, but equally filling breakfast for the guys. Now, they stacked their dishes in the sink, for “later,” and headed out to the pool. The guys wasted no time getting in the water. They found a beach ball and batted it around in a mock volleyball game. More men drifted out to the pool from the house and joined in. When they tired of hitting the ball, they tried a game of chicken. After several elimination rounds,Troy, sitting on Corey’s shoulders, defeated Sam and Cliff for bragging rights. Following the exertion of these activities, the guys were ready to lie out and get some sun. “Anyone else getting hungry?” asked Spin. Bill got the grill going and Brad offered to put on some hot dogs, while Jesse said he’d make some burgers. Charlie found the transition in activity the perfect time to slip away to the beach.
To Be Continued . . .
Meanwhile, in the Men’s Villa, a bunch of guys were coming to a similar decision. “Let’s get some rays!” cried Cliff. About half of the men were in the kitchen. Joe had provided a less diverse, but equally filling breakfast for the guys. Now, they stacked their dishes in the sink, for “later,” and headed out to the pool. The guys wasted no time getting in the water. They found a beach ball and batted it around in a mock volleyball game. More men drifted out to the pool from the house and joined in. When they tired of hitting the ball, they tried a game of chicken. After several elimination rounds,Troy, sitting on Corey’s shoulders, defeated Sam and Cliff for bragging rights. Following the exertion of these activities, the guys were ready to lie out and get some sun. “Anyone else getting hungry?” asked Spin. Bill got the grill going and Brad offered to put on some hot dogs, while Jesse said he’d make some burgers. Charlie found the transition in activity the perfect time to slip away to the beach.
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:58 pm
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Like Carrie, Charlie had seen the dreaded Russell find Hidden Immunity Idol after Hidden Immunity Idol, just by looking for it when the other Survivors weren’t. He figured he could look in the house in the middle of the night, if he needed to, but now was the perfect time to search at the beach. If only he had a clue. The white sand beach was clean and free of debris. He headed down to the water and scanned the ocean. There were some picturesque sailboats on the horizon. A navy destroyer was out running a drill. The sun felt good. Charlie was from the Midwest. His job in medical sales, paid the bills, but he had big dreams. Dreams that needed some capital to fund. Although Chris Harrison hadn’t said anything about money prizes, Charlie hoped that there would be some. In the real Survivor, the winner got a million dollars! Guessing that Bachelor Survivor would have no such prize, since he was really here to find a wife, he thought a $50,000 prize from ABC was a possibility. Or at least, he hoped it would be!
To Be Continued . . .
Like Carrie, Charlie had seen the dreaded Russell find Hidden Immunity Idol after Hidden Immunity Idol, just by looking for it when the other Survivors weren’t. He figured he could look in the house in the middle of the night, if he needed to, but now was the perfect time to search at the beach. If only he had a clue. The white sand beach was clean and free of debris. He headed down to the water and scanned the ocean. There were some picturesque sailboats on the horizon. A navy destroyer was out running a drill. The sun felt good. Charlie was from the Midwest. His job in medical sales, paid the bills, but he had big dreams. Dreams that needed some capital to fund. Although Chris Harrison hadn’t said anything about money prizes, Charlie hoped that there would be some. In the real Survivor, the winner got a million dollars! Guessing that Bachelor Survivor would have no such prize, since he was really here to find a wife, he thought a $50,000 prize from ABC was a possibility. Or at least, he hoped it would be!
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:59 pm
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Carrie also had headed to the beach. Once the pool and surrounding sundeck had become crowded, it had been easy to slip away. The Women’s beach was filled with sugar sand. Carrie loved the feel of it under her feet. There was a nice breeze from the ocean. The beach formed a small cove that added to the private feeling. Now, if I were a Hidden Immunity Idol, where would I be? She thought. Carrie slowly pivoted around, scanning the scenery. She saw a twin palm tree on the left side of the sandy area, as it began to turn into grass. Was she imagining things or did the right trunk of the tree curve so it almost made an “S” shape. Carrie marched across the sand to the tree and looked up it’s trunk. Several green coconuts were fringed by waving palm fronds. She didn’t see anything suspicious there. She eyed the base of the tree and walked around its circumference, looking for any sign of an idol. On the far side of the tree, she saw there was a gap between the two trunks. Could it possibly be this easy? Carrie wondered. She dropped to her knees and stuck her hand in
the gap, pushing away any accumulated sand with her fingers. She felt something hard. It seemed to be wrapped in cloth! Oh, probably, just something left behind by a kid! She thought. Carrie wiggled the rock like shape, felt it loosen under her digging, and pulled it out.
To Be Continued . . .
Carrie also had headed to the beach. Once the pool and surrounding sundeck had become crowded, it had been easy to slip away. The Women’s beach was filled with sugar sand. Carrie loved the feel of it under her feet. There was a nice breeze from the ocean. The beach formed a small cove that added to the private feeling. Now, if I were a Hidden Immunity Idol, where would I be? She thought. Carrie slowly pivoted around, scanning the scenery. She saw a twin palm tree on the left side of the sandy area, as it began to turn into grass. Was she imagining things or did the right trunk of the tree curve so it almost made an “S” shape. Carrie marched across the sand to the tree and looked up it’s trunk. Several green coconuts were fringed by waving palm fronds. She didn’t see anything suspicious there. She eyed the base of the tree and walked around its circumference, looking for any sign of an idol. On the far side of the tree, she saw there was a gap between the two trunks. Could it possibly be this easy? Carrie wondered. She dropped to her knees and stuck her hand in
the gap, pushing away any accumulated sand with her fingers. She felt something hard. It seemed to be wrapped in cloth! Oh, probably, just something left behind by a kid! She thought. Carrie wiggled the rock like shape, felt it loosen under her digging, and pulled it out.
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:59 pm
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Marty was sharing a room with Carrie and Michelle. They had the other bedroom in the suite with Faith, Amy, Emily, and Mehreen. She felt good about her suitemates. They were all a nice bunch of girls. She had been out by the pool with the other Bachelorettes for the past two hours. Now, she was enjoying some “alone time” in her room. This Villa was gorgeous. It had rich dark wood furnishings and luxurious fabrics on the couches, beds, and windows. The carpets were thick and cushiony. She loved to walk on them barefoot. This was a far cry from her childhood home. Oh, she had been happy, growing up as a Tom Boy with four brothers, but those brothers also ate her parents out of house and home. In her upstate New York childhood, life had been pretty simple and fairly plain. Barnard College in New York City had been a rude awakening for Marty. Her roommates who had grown up with summer trips to Europe and tennis and horseback riding lessons had shown her a more sophisticated kind of life and helped put her in touch with her feminine side. In College, she had also found her passion as an Art History major and that led to her career as an Auction consultant. Now she lived in a 1-bedroom apartment on the Upper West Side of Manhattan and the City was at her feet every day. Being on Bachelor Survivor was a well-needed vacation for a hard-working girl and she intended to enjoy every minute of these gorgeous surroundings and all of its amenities. Marty rose and headed for the bathroom, filling the tub with lavender powder, and planning to enjoy a nice, long bubble bath.
To Be Continued . . .
Marty was sharing a room with Carrie and Michelle. They had the other bedroom in the suite with Faith, Amy, Emily, and Mehreen. She felt good about her suitemates. They were all a nice bunch of girls. She had been out by the pool with the other Bachelorettes for the past two hours. Now, she was enjoying some “alone time” in her room. This Villa was gorgeous. It had rich dark wood furnishings and luxurious fabrics on the couches, beds, and windows. The carpets were thick and cushiony. She loved to walk on them barefoot. This was a far cry from her childhood home. Oh, she had been happy, growing up as a Tom Boy with four brothers, but those brothers also ate her parents out of house and home. In her upstate New York childhood, life had been pretty simple and fairly plain. Barnard College in New York City had been a rude awakening for Marty. Her roommates who had grown up with summer trips to Europe and tennis and horseback riding lessons had shown her a more sophisticated kind of life and helped put her in touch with her feminine side. In College, she had also found her passion as an Art History major and that led to her career as an Auction consultant. Now she lived in a 1-bedroom apartment on the Upper West Side of Manhattan and the City was at her feet every day. Being on Bachelor Survivor was a well-needed vacation for a hard-working girl and she intended to enjoy every minute of these gorgeous surroundings and all of its amenities. Marty rose and headed for the bathroom, filling the tub with lavender powder, and planning to enjoy a nice, long bubble bath.
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:00 pm
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Brad, Bill, and Spin were talking about the Bachelorettes they had met the night before. “That Mehreen is really pretty,” said Bill. “She’s really nice, too,” said Brad. “I was her escort last night. I can tell you she’s smart and she’s also a real lady. She’s a teacher.” “Are you interested?” Bill asked. “Only as a friend. As far as I’m concerned, she’s all yours.” Brad told him. “But a few of these other guys may have something to say about that!’ He joked. “Go for it!” advised Spin. “I like Marty. We walked in together from the limos and I feel like we have a lot in common from our conversation last night. We live near each other, too!” “Wow!” said Brad. “That’s like winning the lottery around here! “So, who are you interested in?” asked Bill. Brad thought a moment. “Michele. She’s my type. She looked great in that short red dress and I liked her hair . . . long, silky layers.” “Well, it seems like we all have someone we’d like to get to know better. Here’s to falling in love, guys!” Spin raised his beer and the other two clinked theirs on the neck of the frosty bottle. They all took a long, thoughtful sip.
To Be Continued . . .
Brad, Bill, and Spin were talking about the Bachelorettes they had met the night before. “That Mehreen is really pretty,” said Bill. “She’s really nice, too,” said Brad. “I was her escort last night. I can tell you she’s smart and she’s also a real lady. She’s a teacher.” “Are you interested?” Bill asked. “Only as a friend. As far as I’m concerned, she’s all yours.” Brad told him. “But a few of these other guys may have something to say about that!’ He joked. “Go for it!” advised Spin. “I like Marty. We walked in together from the limos and I feel like we have a lot in common from our conversation last night. We live near each other, too!” “Wow!” said Brad. “That’s like winning the lottery around here! “So, who are you interested in?” asked Bill. Brad thought a moment. “Michele. She’s my type. She looked great in that short red dress and I liked her hair . . . long, silky layers.” “Well, it seems like we all have someone we’d like to get to know better. Here’s to falling in love, guys!” Spin raised his beer and the other two clinked theirs on the neck of the frosty bottle. They all took a long, thoughtful sip.
To Be Continued . . .
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:37 pm
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Just to keep readers straight on my characters, I'll post their names: I have remaining after the 1st rose ceremony
Jackson, the basketball player who is 6'8", he has his eyes on Mimi who is 6'2", Mimi is one of Silver's characters.
Ross-my banjo playing bachelor and Renee- my guitar playing bachelorette; they are busy making music together.
Mary-Margaret- my shy one who is an Executive Secretary to the Vineyard Jesse Jacobi, who some may remember was a bachelor on Jillian's show. She is now referred to as "M".
Mark, my Montana rancher and Marlee, my girl from Kentucky who raises, trains and shows Tennessee Walkers.
Kathleen, is from Georgia and Steve is my handsome guy from Scotland.
Brian and Lucy-Lyn have gone home, Lucy Lyn to the slammer and Brian and FBI agent who arrested Lucy-Lyn.
My story continues.....
M. is so lonely, she doesn't know a soul and is so shy. She can't make herself get going and meet the other girls. She has gotten to know Renee, Kathleen, and Marlee simply because she rode with them in the limousine; and she's rooming with Renee. Renee is so bubbly, plays the guitar like a pro and is talking non-stop about all the handsome guys. M has barely noticed any of them except the now departed Brian. Oh how I wish he were here, she's thinking, I would feel so much better knowing he's close by; he made me feel so
comfortable. I think maybe I could have opened up with him around.
As she is eating her toast and drinking her coffee, in walks Kathleen and Marlee busy talking about the guys. They grab their plates, pile loads of food onto the plates, each saying how starved they are. They come over to where M is sitting. "Mind if we sit here with you M?" Kathleen asks. "Certainly," replies M, smiling, welcoming the company. About the same time Renee joins them.
They start talking about all the handsome men, several names are mentioned in addition to Steve, Ross, Mark, Jackson and they even mention the handsomest one of the bunch, Brian. "I wonder what happened to him?" ask Renee. They are all talk about how they heard that he arrested Lucy-Lyn for trying to extort money from Chris. Kathleen speaks up and says, "I hear he may be coming back, or he may already be back; seems he's a friend of Chris and his wife, Gwen; I sure hope so because that is one guy I want to get to know. He seems so sincere, so down to earth.....so...ah gorgeous!" They all agree with what she's saying, except M is thinking, Oh no, he won't have any time for me with all these other girls hanging around him. I just want to go home.
......To be Continued
Just to keep readers straight on my characters, I'll post their names: I have remaining after the 1st rose ceremony
Jackson, the basketball player who is 6'8", he has his eyes on Mimi who is 6'2", Mimi is one of Silver's characters.
Ross-my banjo playing bachelor and Renee- my guitar playing bachelorette; they are busy making music together.
Mary-Margaret- my shy one who is an Executive Secretary to the Vineyard Jesse Jacobi, who some may remember was a bachelor on Jillian's show. She is now referred to as "M".
Mark, my Montana rancher and Marlee, my girl from Kentucky who raises, trains and shows Tennessee Walkers.
Kathleen, is from Georgia and Steve is my handsome guy from Scotland.
Brian and Lucy-Lyn have gone home, Lucy Lyn to the slammer and Brian and FBI agent who arrested Lucy-Lyn.
My story continues.....
M. is so lonely, she doesn't know a soul and is so shy. She can't make herself get going and meet the other girls. She has gotten to know Renee, Kathleen, and Marlee simply because she rode with them in the limousine; and she's rooming with Renee. Renee is so bubbly, plays the guitar like a pro and is talking non-stop about all the handsome guys. M has barely noticed any of them except the now departed Brian. Oh how I wish he were here, she's thinking, I would feel so much better knowing he's close by; he made me feel so
comfortable. I think maybe I could have opened up with him around.
As she is eating her toast and drinking her coffee, in walks Kathleen and Marlee busy talking about the guys. They grab their plates, pile loads of food onto the plates, each saying how starved they are. They come over to where M is sitting. "Mind if we sit here with you M?" Kathleen asks. "Certainly," replies M, smiling, welcoming the company. About the same time Renee joins them.
They start talking about all the handsome men, several names are mentioned in addition to Steve, Ross, Mark, Jackson and they even mention the handsomest one of the bunch, Brian. "I wonder what happened to him?" ask Renee. They are all talk about how they heard that he arrested Lucy-Lyn for trying to extort money from Chris. Kathleen speaks up and says, "I hear he may be coming back, or he may already be back; seems he's a friend of Chris and his wife, Gwen; I sure hope so because that is one guy I want to get to know. He seems so sincere, so down to earth.....so...ah gorgeous!" They all agree with what she's saying, except M is thinking, Oh no, he won't have any time for me with all these other girls hanging around him. I just want to go home.
......To be Continued
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:38 pm
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The 5 girls and 4 guys who remained from the 3rd group of limo-riders to arrive at the cocktail party, decided to crash together in their new digs on Monday night.
With the drama that had happened between Rayne and Joel and Leo, this group of 9 felt a bond of protection and connection, and each felt that they did know each other better than others they met at the party. Well ..... all but one of them, actually.
The odd "man" out, so to speak, was Mimi, who had latched on to Jackson at the party and didn't really fraternize much with the others. She seemed to not care to get know too many other bach/ettes, especially the girls.
So now, at the Villas, she was at a little bit of a disadvantage, not having made friends with the girls, but rather looking upon them as "the competition." This being the case, who should she room with? The 5 ladies ~ Mimi, Bryanne, Rayne, Pamela, and Toni had crashed in one of the bedrooms Monday night, and Rayne had generously offered to take the couch in the sitting room, since it was late, the other bedroom in the suite was fully occupied, and they were all too pooped to figure out anything else.
Now, on Tuesday morning, Rayne knew she was going to have to find a bed for herself OR for Mimi.
The four remaining guys from limo group 3 ~~ Roman, Martin, Will and Leo ~~ seemed to get along really well, and had decided they would stay together in the suite they landed in on Monday night.
On Tuesday morning ~~ well, truth be told early Tuesday afternoon ~~ awakened by the smell of coffee and the sound of hooting and hollering from the beach, they ventured out of bed, into shorts and swimming trunks, downstairs to the kitchen and then out to the volleyball and chicken games in the pool.
The 5 girls and 4 guys who remained from the 3rd group of limo-riders to arrive at the cocktail party, decided to crash together in their new digs on Monday night.
With the drama that had happened between Rayne and Joel and Leo, this group of 9 felt a bond of protection and connection, and each felt that they did know each other better than others they met at the party. Well ..... all but one of them, actually.
The odd "man" out, so to speak, was Mimi, who had latched on to Jackson at the party and didn't really fraternize much with the others. She seemed to not care to get know too many other bach/ettes, especially the girls.
So now, at the Villas, she was at a little bit of a disadvantage, not having made friends with the girls, but rather looking upon them as "the competition." This being the case, who should she room with? The 5 ladies ~ Mimi, Bryanne, Rayne, Pamela, and Toni had crashed in one of the bedrooms Monday night, and Rayne had generously offered to take the couch in the sitting room, since it was late, the other bedroom in the suite was fully occupied, and they were all too pooped to figure out anything else.
Now, on Tuesday morning, Rayne knew she was going to have to find a bed for herself OR for Mimi.
The four remaining guys from limo group 3 ~~ Roman, Martin, Will and Leo ~~ seemed to get along really well, and had decided they would stay together in the suite they landed in on Monday night.
On Tuesday morning ~~ well, truth be told early Tuesday afternoon ~~ awakened by the smell of coffee and the sound of hooting and hollering from the beach, they ventured out of bed, into shorts and swimming trunks, downstairs to the kitchen and then out to the volleyball and chicken games in the pool.
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by SmartandTruthful Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:38 pm
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Izzy ............ I'm so sorry you're not feeling well. Food poisoning ...
yuck!! It just seems like anymore, we have to be very careful what we eat or
drink. Those nasty bacteria are everywhere!! You continue to get better and
better, okay?
Glad you appreciate the dimples,
Izzy! As I wrote Will's features, I thought of you and your Darlin' Dimples (or
Dimples Darlin'?).
S&T, Mackey ...................Rayne will need to find her or Mimi a bed tomorrow. I've got
to quit for the evening. Nite!
~~ STORY TO BE CONTINUED ~~
Izzy ............ I'm so sorry you're not feeling well. Food poisoning ...
yuck!! It just seems like anymore, we have to be very careful what we eat or
drink. Those nasty bacteria are everywhere!! You continue to get better and
better, okay?
Glad you appreciate the dimples,
Izzy! As I wrote Will's features, I thought of you and your Darlin' Dimples (or
Dimples Darlin'?).
S&T, Mackey ...................Rayne will need to find her or Mimi a bed tomorrow. I've got
to quit for the evening. Nite!
~~ STORY TO BE CONTINUED ~~
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by SmartandTruthful Tue Apr 09, 2013 10:15 am
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The girls decided they would put their swimsuits on and head to the pool to relax and get some sun. Renee and M knew they would probably be getting another roommate as did Kathleen and Marlee, anyway, they shared a suite between the four and was able to continue their newfound friendship.
Besides playing the guitar, the girls found out that Renee was a speech writer who traveled often to Washington D.C. and other places around the world. Kathleen owned her own business which was passed on to her from her mother who received it from her mother. It was a craft shop that included various handmade items made by Kathleen and her mother along with consignments from other people. M, of course was an Executive Secretary and as the girls found out was very good at taking care of all the details of running a very busy business. She spoke highly of her boss. Marlee showed the girls pictures of her horses and pictures of the various trophies she received in the shows she performed on all over the world. They could tell she loved her horses and treated them with care and love.
Out at the pool they continued to talk about the guys they met and who they wanted to get to know. Kathleen was eager to get to know Will and Brad and thought the twins, Troy and Corey were so handsome. Of course she was sorry to see Paul leave but understood he was back with an old girlfriend. Renee wanted to get to know Bill and Greg and really liked Sam. Marlee mentioned Johnny and Charlie but liked Cliff, too. Asking M who she was attracted to, she said she just didn't get to meet anyone other than Walter who went home. She did say she had a short conversation with Will.
As the girls were enjoying their day off, the guys decided they would play a few games of pool. In getting to know each other Mark and Jackson, who were roommates, found out that they had alot in common, both loved the outdoors and especially camping and hiking. They had both traveled all over the U.S. and had also enjoyed world camping and hiking. Ross who was a musician roomed with Steve who owned his own computer business. They were also roommates in a suite with Mark and Jackson.
After their game of pool, they began talking about the girls. Mark mentioned Marlee who he was attracted to right away. Jackson couldn't stop talking about Mimi and he was hoping to get to know her better. Ross wanted to get to know Jenarosa and Amy, he mentioned a nice conversation with Emily. Steve said he had a good time with Kathleen and also liked the other twin Penina and thought he would like to get to know Carrie and Rayne and Toni. It seemed all the guys were open to getting to know all the girls with only Jackson in cloud nine over Mimi.
At was a pleasant day for all. They were all looking forward to getting back with the girls and what was in the pike for them.
.........To be continued
The girls decided they would put their swimsuits on and head to the pool to relax and get some sun. Renee and M knew they would probably be getting another roommate as did Kathleen and Marlee, anyway, they shared a suite between the four and was able to continue their newfound friendship.
Besides playing the guitar, the girls found out that Renee was a speech writer who traveled often to Washington D.C. and other places around the world. Kathleen owned her own business which was passed on to her from her mother who received it from her mother. It was a craft shop that included various handmade items made by Kathleen and her mother along with consignments from other people. M, of course was an Executive Secretary and as the girls found out was very good at taking care of all the details of running a very busy business. She spoke highly of her boss. Marlee showed the girls pictures of her horses and pictures of the various trophies she received in the shows she performed on all over the world. They could tell she loved her horses and treated them with care and love.
Out at the pool they continued to talk about the guys they met and who they wanted to get to know. Kathleen was eager to get to know Will and Brad and thought the twins, Troy and Corey were so handsome. Of course she was sorry to see Paul leave but understood he was back with an old girlfriend. Renee wanted to get to know Bill and Greg and really liked Sam. Marlee mentioned Johnny and Charlie but liked Cliff, too. Asking M who she was attracted to, she said she just didn't get to meet anyone other than Walter who went home. She did say she had a short conversation with Will.
As the girls were enjoying their day off, the guys decided they would play a few games of pool. In getting to know each other Mark and Jackson, who were roommates, found out that they had alot in common, both loved the outdoors and especially camping and hiking. They had both traveled all over the U.S. and had also enjoyed world camping and hiking. Ross who was a musician roomed with Steve who owned his own computer business. They were also roommates in a suite with Mark and Jackson.
After their game of pool, they began talking about the girls. Mark mentioned Marlee who he was attracted to right away. Jackson couldn't stop talking about Mimi and he was hoping to get to know her better. Ross wanted to get to know Jenarosa and Amy, he mentioned a nice conversation with Emily. Steve said he had a good time with Kathleen and also liked the other twin Penina and thought he would like to get to know Carrie and Rayne and Toni. It seemed all the guys were open to getting to know all the girls with only Jackson in cloud nine over Mimi.
At was a pleasant day for all. They were all looking forward to getting back with the girls and what was in the pike for them.
.........To be continued
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