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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sat Apr 06, 2013 10:07 pm

BACHELOR SURVIVOR

Hi, Everyone! Here is a story originally posted on the ABC Bachelorette Board from July 17, 2010 through October 21,
2010. I hope you can enjoy it while we wait for Des’ season to begin! I’m posting it with credit to my dear writing friends for their parts of our story. Here is how it all began:



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Hi, Everyone! With Ali’s season getting to the nail-biting point, it’s time for another story to help us get through the week between episodes. Chip, Travy, Mackey, Silver and I hope you will come along for the ride as we spin the tale of our new joint writing venture: Bachelor Survivor!

Enjoy! S&T


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BACHELOR SURVIVOR

Across America and around the world, millions of people eagerly turned on their TVs at 8PM EST on Monday night. They gathered their bowls of popcorn and M&Ms, beverages of choice, and cozy throws and settled down on couches of all sizes, descriptions, and colors to watch the new season of The Bachelor. ABC had kept who the new Bachelor would be “under wraps.” So, the viewing audience was sitting on the edge of their seats as the show began.

The camera panned in on a smiling Chris Harrison, sitting in a familiar den-like setting. ”Good Evening, Everyone!” began the consummate host, “Tonight we will embark on a new journey into the world of The Bachelor. Over the years, we’ve had thousands of men and women writing us about how much they want to be the next Bachelor or Bachelorette.” Chris paused, knowing that the fans watching all over the world needed a moment to take in his announcement. “Tonight, we will introduce . . . not one . . . but 25 new Bachelors . . . and at the same time . . . we will introduce . . . 25 new Bachelorettes!” Again, Chris paused, knowing that the viewing audience needed to process this news. “In just a few minutes, our Bachelors and Bachelorettes will arrive and they will begin competing in our latest and the BIGGEST TWIST to our show EVER . . . Welcome to . . . Bachelor Survivor . . . let the games begin!” With that, the music swelled and the scene changed as the outside camera swept over the front of the now famous orange stucco “Bachelor Mansion,” as ABC cut to a commercial.

To Be Continued . . .


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When the show resumed, Chris was standing in the floodlighted landscaped area before the Bachelor Mansion, and two black limousines were approaching. The two luxurious cars pulled up, one on the left and one on the right. Simultaneously, a Bachelor stepped out of the limo on the right and a Bachelorette stepped out of the limo on the left. They each walked to Chris. “We’re Number 1!” the guy shouted, winking at the beautiful brunette at his side.” “Yes, we are Number 1!” she nodded in agreement. Chris watched as they introduced themselves to each other. They were escorts for the evening, but that was only a formality. The night was about mingling and getting to know all of the others at the Cocktail Party, because at the end of the evening, each Bachelor and Bachelorette would be making some very important decisions. “I’m Sam,” said the handsome tuxedo-clad Bachelor with his brown hair cut in a short, trendy style. “Hi, Sam,” said the brunette with a sparkling smile and a great figure wrapped in a red cocktail dress, “I’m Amelia.” “Sam, Amelia,” said Chris, “Now that you’ve met, go on inside and get acquainted.” “Oh, we will,” assured Sam, as he offered Amelia his arm and led her down the path to the Mansion.

To Be Continued . . .


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The next pair to step forward introduced themselves as Cliff, a fit 6’4” guy with blonde surfer style hair, and Emily, a petite, 5’ 2” honey blonde. They both chuckled about their height difference, but Cliff commented sincerely, “I like your laugh, Emily!” They took hands and walked up the path to the mansion.

As Marty got out of the limo, her heel got caught in the hem of her russet-colored, ruffled dress. She was in mid-fall, when she was caught up in the arms of a very handsome man with prematurely gray hair. “My hero!” said Marty, looking up into clear blue eyes, marked with concern. “Any time, Sweetheart!” Spin replied. They introduced themselves before Chris with a definite spark detonated between them.

The fourth couple was a handsome pair named Brad and Mehreen. Brad was a medium height, African American, with a short black afro. “I’m from Atlanta,” he said, in a deep voice with a slight Southern twang. “I was born in Pakistan, but I’ve lived in New Jersey since I was two.” Mehreen, responded with a sweet smile, adorning her classically beautiful face. “I’m pleased to meet you,” said Brad. “Me too! By the way, I’ve never been to Atlanta.” The couple walked off, chatting easily together.

When the fifth couple stepped out of the limo, the Bachelor did a double-take and called out in surprise, “Mary?” It was obvious to the viewing audience that he recognized the Bachelorette he was paired with. “Paul?” replied Mary. “What are you doing here?” They hugged each other and approached Chris holding hands. Paul explained, “Hi, Chris. I’m Paul, and Mary, here, was my girl friend in college!” “I think that’s a first,” Chris commented with a smile. “Yes, Paul went to Notre Dame and I was at St. Mary’s. I can’t believe we’re both here tonight. This is crazy!” Paul and Mary left Chris to head into the Mansion. Chris turned to the camera, “Well, what about that, folks? We’ll be right back for the arrival of our second set of limos.”

To Be Continued . . .


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Hi S&T - It looks like we meet up here once again. It's good to be back!


Two more limos pull up and out of the first is a lovely girl with dark auburn hair, dressed in a royal blue strapless cocktail dress. She's wearing high-heeled silver strapped sandals, dangling from her ears are sterling silver looped earrings. At the same time, stepping out of the limo on the right is a sandy haired man 6'1" with eyes as blue as the ocean, a smile as big as the sea. He approaches the lady and says, "Well, hello there, I'm Mark, I'm from Montana, and you're?" "Hi, Mark, I'm Marlee and I'm from Kentucky, the blue-grass state where there are as many horses as their are people". They smile, taking her hand, they approach Chris, practically ignoring him, Mark says, "So are you a horse lady, Marlee?" Smiling up into his deep blue eyes with her deep brown eyes, she replies, "Why yes I am, Mark." Chris says, "Well, don't mind me folks, Mark, why don't you take Marlee into the mansion and meet the other bachelors and bachelorettes. Together, hand in hand, still talking, they leave for the mansion.


From the next limo, a very, very tall gentlemen emerges from the limo, walks over the next limo and waits as the door is opened. Out comes red stiletto strappy shoe. Then comes the hand, with long false red nails, placed into his hand. Following that, a platinum blonde emerges wearing a skimpy black silk short dress. The spaghetti straps are beginning to fall off her shoulders. Looking into the brown eyes of the tall stranger, Lucy-Lynn gives her Marilyn Monroe sexy smile. "My you're tall" she whispers. "Yes, you would say I am". He notices the red is carried over onto her lips down to her toenails. She flips her fake platinum blonde hair, which is obvious to Jackson. As she does, the long dangling black and red beaded earrings swish across her face. "Be careful, little lady" Jackson says, "those look dangerous." Rolling her eyes to him, she replies, "That's not all that is dangerous about me, did you say your name is Jackson" "Yes, I believe I did" Jackson is not in the least impressed with this girl. "Let's go meet Chris", he offers his arm. Chris sees Jackson, "Well, it looks like we have one of our tallest bachelors ever. I believe you are Jackson, am I right" and turning to Lucy-Lyn he continues, "and you are Lucy-Lyn, I believe" "How tall are you Jackson", Chris asks. "I'm 6'7 1/2", Chris"...Basketball player, am I right?" asks Chris. "Yes I am Chris." Chris can tell Jackson is eager to get going. "You two go on in and meet the others" As they walk away, Lucy-Lyn tries her best to snuggle up to Jackson but he has nothing to do with that; he's eager to get inside and away from this.....


......To be continued . . .


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Emerging from the next limo is a 6'3" dark black hair "Knight" wearing a dark blue suit that accents his hazel eyes. Without a doubt, he is the best looking bachelor ever and the lovely girl getting out of her limo immediately catches her breath as she looks into his face. His smile is as dazzling as his looks and as he approaches Kathleen, he immediately sees one of the prettiest girls he has ever seen. "Hi my name is Steve" he says as he approaches the girl dressed in a beautiful peach gown of mid-length. Her beautiful brunette hair is natural in its curls as they fall on her shoulders. He notices how small she is at the waist as the dress flows into a full skirt. She's wearing dyed to match strapped-heeled sandals. When she smiles into his face, he notices she has hazel eyes also. "Hi Steve, my name is Kathleen, and I notice a accent" she states questioningly. "Yes, I'm from Scotland, Kathleen, and it sounds like you have a slight accent yourself?" Laughing, Kathleen replies, "Yes, I guess you would say I have a "Southern" accent, I'm from Georgia, thus the peach dress" she says as she sweeps her hands out and takes a turn, stumbling as she turns into his strong arms. He catches her and they remain embraced for just a second before they turn towards Chris. Chris has a few words and instructions for them and watches as they walk away into the mansion.


......To be continued


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As the next limousine pulls up, Chris is thinking what a different group of girls and guys there are this time. He's eager to see how this new format turns out.


Stepping out of the next limo is a blondish-red haired unassuming guy who is busy looking around, looking as if he is sizing up the place. He is well-built, but not in the muscle-man sense, more in the athletic-natural kind of way. Someone who works out running rather than muscle-building. He is very handsome in a serious sort of way, seems to
look like he has a lot on his mind. He looks over at the next limo and out comes a short-black haired pixy girl. She can't be much taller than 5'2" dressed in a yellow sun-type silk dress with straps, a red belted waist, which Brian notices he could wrap his hands around. She is tiny and so cute he's thinking, "Think why you're here, Brian" He knows there are other more important things at the moment. Walking over to her, he takes her hand, smiles into her blue eyes and says, "hi I'm Brian, are you as nervous as I am?" Looking into his handsome face, Mary-Margaret replies, "I'm scared to death, I didn't ask for this, my sister nominated me for this, I'm Mary-Margaret!" "Just relax" Brain smiles, "we'll get through this together." Brian smiles as he looks at her with his clear green eyes" Right away Mary-Marget is enchanted by his good nature. She places her hand through his arm as they approach Chris. Chris looks into Brian's eyes and they acknowledge each other just with a simple but unnoticed nod. "Hi you two, I see you've met, why don't you go on in an introduce yourselves to the others. He watches them leave, seeing Mary-Margaret holding on for dear life. He knows she is in the very best of hands.



The final couple to approach Chris is a smiling, laughing twosome who just seems to be taking in all the wonders of the moment. The man was quite handsome with long brown hair to his shoulders, dressed in jeans, white shirt and a blue denim jacket, casual but very "now" He sort of reminds Chris of another bachelor by the name of Wes, yet he sees a genuineness in this one. "Yea, I sing and play the banjo," Ross says as he looks into the green eyes of a girl named Renee. She's so very pretty wearing a gold shift-type gown, wearing black-heeled sandals. "Oh my gosh, I play the guitar, maybe we can do some picking together" she laughs. "Ross and Renee, I believe you have met each other. It looks like me may have some music to enjoy during this journey. So, Ross take this lovely youth lady inside and introduce her to the others.


With that, the mansion now has the first 10 bachelors and 10 bachelorettes. He stands waiting for the next limousine to appear.


.....To be continued


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WhooooooooooooooooooHooooooooooooooooooo
a new story. Thanks in advance.


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:25 pm

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Great Job, Mackey! Thanks, Robin! OK, Travy, are you around? Silver
may need to wait a while to post and Chip's characters are riding in the last
limo! Ha! Keep those limos coming! S&T


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OMG....OMG....OMG!!!!! My favorite
Thread!!! Thank you....Can't wait to read more! Great idea with
putting together two of my favorite shows...Suvivor and The Bachelor!
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Good Morning, Izzy! Here comes some more! S&T


Posting this next section for Silver who has family commitments today:

2 more limousines arrived, one carrying another 5 bachelors and the other another set of 5 bachelorette beauties.

From each limo, a prospective love interest stepped out into the balmy Los Angeles night air, and walked toward Chris, joining hands as they got within a few feet of him.

First up in this group of 10 singles were Mimi and Roman.

Mimi was a tall, Swedish sort of beauty with naturally full lips and high cheek bones, cascading strawberry blonde curls, and the sky-bluest of eyes, highlighted this evening with green eye shadow and a set of false eyelashes, making her appear as stately and “on,” as a model might be as she prepares for a shoot. She was dressed in a strapless knee-length empire gown, the blue of which matched her eyes, and silvery 1” sandals. She looked comfortable, but elegant. She greeted Chris with a European air kiss, and a small hug.

Roman matched Mimi’s height, at 6’2”. He had brown hair with natural blonde highlights, that was long enough to frame his face, his ears and his strong neck, without being scraggly, just enough to run your fingers through and feel there was some body there. His deep brown eyes brought substance to his otherwise fine but strikingly handsome facial features. And he had strong but lean fingers, with nicely-shaped nails. He wore a navy suit, and pale blue shirt, with a slate-on-blue tiny print tie. After allowing Mimi the first hello to Chris, he took his turn to shake hands with the host, who wished them both well.

To Be Continued . . .

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Still making Silver’s posts: The second pair to emerge from the limos and approach Chris was Bryanne & Martin.
Bryanne looked like a hometown sweetie, with brunette hair pulled into a pretty ponytail, and tiny tendril curls framing her cheeks. Her green eyes sparkled as she smiled at Martin, taking his hand, and then approaching Chris with a warm STORYTIME:  BACHELOR SURVIVOR 2910745359 and hug. She was wearing a floor-length one-shoulder cream-colored gown with a beaded bodice and matching beaded belt, and 2-inch cream satin heels with tiny butterflies embossed into the material. Bryanne’s medium height matched Chris’ and Joel’s perfectly.

Martin was dark-haired, with thick eyebrows and brown/almost black eyes. He was of Latino descent, with the warm brown skin that was a perfect match for those eyes of his. He wore a tiny stud earring in one lobe, but the curls of his hair around his ears hid it at times. He had a respectful approach to Bryanne, and kissed her hand as they met and approached Chris. He was dressed all in black, tieless, with an open collar on his silk shirt. He guided Bryanne to Chris’ side, with his hand gently placed at the small of her back.


To Be Continued . . .
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Still for Silver: The next pair to greet Chris was Rayne and Joel.

Rayne was petite and trim, at 5’2”, one of the smallest of the girls in the group of 25 bachelorettes. But you could tell she was mighty! She emerged from the limo, with a hop to the
driveway, and a smile that lit up the night. Big brown eyes were the focus of her face, with her pure naturally blonde hair piled up in a loose bun and bangs. She wore a red mummy-wrap Herve Leger-style dress that showed off her small but strong figure beautifully, accented by high red strappy sandals with big red blossoms right over the foot. Joel let out a wolf whistle as he took her hand and they approached Chris.


Joel was spunky, you could tell! He was about 5’8”, so certainly not a towering man, but the perfect height to welcome and escort Rayne. Joel was also blonde, wearing his hair in an uncomplicated crew cut, and his eyes were a pale blue under thin eyebrows and eyelids, giving him a little bit of a Kasey-Kahl-look in his face. Tonight he wore khaki slacks, with a beige crew-neck polo shirt under a navy sport coat. He and Rayne met Chris, then jogged into the house to meet the others.

To Be Continued . . .
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Post by victorian3 on Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:07 am

Oh wow!!! I am loving this. Where's the rest.... In the importal words from a well beloved classic "...more, please"....


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Post by SLA44 on Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:10 am

victorian3 wrote:Oh wow!!1 i am loving this. Where's the rest.... In the importal words from a well beloved classic "...more, please"....

LOL - you are as bad as me vic3, I couldn't get her fast enough as soon as S&T posted another segment but I think she has gone to bed by now. I am really loving this thing and can't wait for more. STORYTIME:  BACHELOR SURVIVOR 3815714222
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Post by victorian3 on Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:15 am

Well, I can't keep all these bach and bachettes straight (not without my infamous notes) and there are more to arrive SOOO let's just skip ahead to what happens inside with everyone thee. The rules, etc. Seems like it could be BP type games with people paired up and couples being eliminated. Then everyone switches partners (kind of like speed dating).Smile Good night.
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:21 pm

Ha, Ha, 3Vic & SLA! I'll do the best I can, but there are all kinds of things I have to do to get a post from my computer to here - then the pagination on here is all short and weird looking, so I have to edit them line by line to get them to look nice! I know, probably silly, but it looks and reads so much better!
Also, I don't want to cut out any of my fellow writers entries and it's important to get to know most of these characters. Maybe I'll provide a "cheat sheet" at a later date to help you out! Once the story gets started it will all fall into place.
Also, my word document on this story is 411 pages long - of course a lot of that is posting information and icons from the ABC Board, but it gives you an idea of what is involved in posting this story.
More coming up! I think I'll post several entries and go back and edit them after I've posted a section.
Enjoy! S&T
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Still posting for Silver:

The fourth couple to meet and approach Chris was Pamela and Will.

Pamela was of Filipino American descent, her father having met her mother while stationed in the Phillipines. She was strikingly lovely, with deep brown eyes and straight black hair, and naturally dark lips that needed no extra color, really. This evening her hair was just down and flowing, and she wore gold hoop earrings that peeked out from beneath her hair when she moved her head in certain ways. She wore a cowl-neck white sleeveless dress with a yellow and green floral pattern. The dress had a plunging back accessorized by a
tiny-gold-beaded necklace that hung beautifully to the back. Her shoes were open toed yellow and green swirled pattern pumps. Pamela came about to Will’s shoulders as they took hands and approached Chris.


Will had the look of what you would say was a typical Irishman …. He was 5’11”, had short curly auburn hair and hazel eyes that tonight looked green as he stood next to Pamela in his grey pin-striped suit, pale green shirt, and narrow grey silk tie. He had rosy lips, the handsomest set of dimples of any of the guys so far, and Will had freckles … not a shock of them, just enough to make him so darned cute, you wanted to just smile into his eyes! He blushed a little as he met up with Pamela, who then greeted Chris with a tiny bow and a warm grasp of hands.


To Be Continued . . .


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Still posting for Silver:

The last of the bachelors and
bachelorettes from this pair of limos was Toni and Leo.


Toni stood at a medium height of about 5’7”, had short black straight hair in a soft wispy style, and nearly-royal blue eyes that just drew you in to their color. She had naturally rosy cheeks and lips on a fair complexion, and eyelashes that really needed no help to be attractive. Toni had a long neck, very feminine shoulders and bust, and a long waist. She carried herself nicely, with good posture and long strides in her walk. She was wearing a short multi-layered chiffon evening dress in black with silver piping at the hem of each layer, tiny bell cap sleeves with silver piping, and matching silver thong sandals. She was the only bachelorette in this group to meet her escort with a hug and small kiss on the cheek, before they approached Chris Harrison.


Her escort Leo was an athletically-built fellow, who may have played football in his high-school and college years. He was tall and solid and muscular, weighing In at probably about 250# on a 6' frame. Leo’s suit was a taupe shade of brown, and he had chosen a white dress shirt and black tie with tiny beige polka dots. Leo wore his ash brown hair a little bit long and layered so as not to look shaggy, about down to the top of his shirt collar. His blue eyes danced and his smile sparkled as he accepted Toni’s relaxing kiss, thinking she must have sensed his case of nerves. Together they greeted Chris and approached the party at the Mansion.
To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:25 pm

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OK, so that is Silver's part so far. Travy's characters will be arriving soon! S&T


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:26 pm

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What a great new story....you are
wonderful writers (S&T, amd Mackey)---I know I will enjoy this
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And S&T....my goodness Spin and
Marty??? Boy that takes me back....(showing my age here...LOL



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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:31 pm

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Thanks, Super! Yes, good old Spin and Marty (the names at least) ride again! Ha! S&T
Travy, these are for you!

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As the fourth set of limousines pulled up in the driveway, Chris felt a bit like the Bachelors and Bachelorettes of the past, wondering just who would emerge next.

The door on the men’s limo opened and an average-sized man with blonde hair emerged, dressed in jeans and a tan jacket over a yellow shirt adorned with a blue and yellow plaid tie. A lovely blonde in a pale blue gown joined him and the pair walked to Chris. “I’m Tommy. Pleased to meet you,” said the Bachelor, shaking hands with Chris Harrison first and then with the girl in blue. “Hello!” said the girl, smiling with sky blue eyes, as well as her soft rose-colored lips. “I’m Faith. I’m from Yardsley, Pennsylvania.” “Oh,” said Tommy, “Cool! I’m from Abilene, Texas, myself.” “All right, you too,” Chris urged, “Go ahead and meet the others already inside.”

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When Johnny stepped out of the limo, he caught a glimpse of a beautiful girl in a blue dress with long blonde curls falling down her back. She was just entering the Mansion. Cinderella! flashed through his mind before he looked over at a young woman approaching him. She had shoulder length brown hair, blown very straight with soft layers cut at the front to frame her face. “I’m Michelle,” she said when they reached Chris. She paused to pull down the hem of her short, shiny red dress. “Hi, Michelle! I’m Johnny!” Johnny was a nice looking guy with a brown crew cut and amber-colored eyes shining through his glasses. He came across a bit nerdy, wearing his black suit, white shirt and trademark red and blue paisley bowtie, but nerdy was fine with him.


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The next pair to approach Chris was Sandy and Bill. Sandy was a tall brunette with a long face that some would consider “horsey.” Bill had deep auburn hair and emerald green eyes that showed he was relaxed about the evening and ready to enjoy the experience.

They were followed by Amy and Jesse. Amy’s oriental heritage was clear from her dark almond-shaped eyes and the shiny black hair cut in a bob. She wore a short pink silk slipdress that framed her exquisite figure perfectly. Jesse had brown hair cut in a layered style. His hair combined with the navy blazer and gray slacks he wore were a throwback to a 1964 Beatles look.

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The final couple to exit the fourth set of limos was an interesting contrast to each other. Mary Ann was tall, all curves, and gorgeous in a model-like way. Joe was the same height, but with an angular slender build. He was a handsome man with dark hair, chocolate-colored eyes fringed with lashes any woman would die for. She had a peaches and cream complexion, light brown eyes, and long brown hair that gleamed with natural blonde highlights. Chris witnessed their introductions and the viewing audience learned that Mary Ann was from Providence, R.I., and Joe was from Miami, FL. Chris invited them to enter the mansion and watched them walk down the path.


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