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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:51 pm

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Here come Chip’s Bachelors and Bachelorettes:

Chris Harrison waited patiently as the fifth and final set of limousines pulled up before the mansion. He saw that two women exited the limo on the left together and two men came out of the limo on the right. Both couples smiled at each other approvingly and laughed as they walked toward the host to introduce themselves. Upon closer inspection, the viewing audience realized they were witnessing the arrival of two sets of identical twins. “Hi, I’m Troy,” offered the male, wearing a well-tailored navy suit, light blue shirt, and a beautiful blue-striped tie, sprinkled with a small paisley print. “And, I’m Corey!” added his twin dressed in a sharp black suit, crisp white shirt, and a gray-and-black diamond patterned tie. “Oh, I’m Jenarosa,” said the lovely brunette, wearing a blue chiffon dress that varied in shades from the palest sky blue to the deepest navy that fell just above her silver high heels. She looked lovely with her soft curls swept up on top of her head. “And, I’m Penina!” chimed in her twin, who was wearing a stunning, black empire waist dress and had her long brown hair pulled up, so that it trailed fetchingly down her back. “Delighted to meet you,” Troy said, offering his arm to Jenarosa. Corey commented, “Great dress!” and took Penina’s hand in his. Chris watched as the two magically color-coordinated couples strolled toward the mansion, shaking his head and thinking, It looks like double trouble to me!


To Be Continued . . .
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:56 pm

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These are still Chip's characters:

Next, a rather shy pair emerged from the limos and Chris noticed they barely looked at each other while walkin towards him. Since the Bachelor seemed to be quite nervous, the blushing blonde Bachelorette spoke up. “Hi, Chris, I’m Lindsey. I’m really nervous to be on TV.” “Lindsey, try to ignore the cameras and you’ll get use to them sooner.” “Thanks,” she said, managing a smile, “That sounds like good advice.” Now the Bachelor knew he had to say something, but he cleared his throat first. “I’m W-W-Walter,” he stuttered. Chris put his hand on Walter’s shoulder, while he offered encouragement. “Walter, there are going to be 25 Bachelorettes in there,” pointing to the Mansion, “and they are all here to meet you! All you need to do is be yourself and meet as many ladies as you can.” “Th-th-thanks!” said Walter. Lindsey took pitty on Walter and walked him toward the door, saying, “Walter, you’re a nice looking guy . . . “

To Be Continued . . .
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:59 pm

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These are still Chip's characters:

As the next pair approached Chris, the woman exuded “attitude!” She took one look at her escort and dismissed him, saying to Chris, “I’m Marsha, Chris. I can’t wait to meet all those handsome Bachelors!” Marsha set off for the Mansion by herself. Chris coughed and looked towards the Bachelor. He had a nice smile and obviously was amused by Marsha and her attempt at worldliness that just came across as plain rudeness. “Hi Chris, it’s nice to meet you. I’m Greg." The Bachelor paused a moment to watch Marsha charging into the Mansion. "You’ll have to excuse me, Chris, but I think I missed the bus!” Greg joked as he headed for the front door. “Enjoy!” Chris called after him.


The last couple to emerge from the limousines introduced themselves as Charlie and Carrie. “Congratulations!” said Chris. “As the last couple to arrive at the Mansion, the 25th Bachelor and the 25th Bachelorette, you each have Individual Immunity tonight.” “Individual Immunity?” asked Carrie. “No one’s ever had that on The Bachelor.” “That’s true,” replied Chris. “But you’ll understand better later in the evening, right now all the two of you need to know is that you will not be going home tonight! And, if you’d like my advice, you probably don’t want to mention this to anyone else.” “All right!” said Charlie. “You must be my good luck charm, Carrie!” He gave her a quick hug and they walked to the house, not quite believing their good fortune.


To Be Continued . . .
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 1:05 pm

OK, so now you have met all of the Bachelors and Bachelorettes - and look - they are all described on the first two pages of this story - so, if you ever get confused, you can always go back to page 1 and page 2 to refresh your memory about any character.

That's enough for now! S&T
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:27 pm

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Once all of the Bachelors and Bachelorettes had entered the Mansion, Chris joined them for a moment in the living room. He made a brief announcement, “Welcome all, to our new season of The Bachelor! We will be calling this season . . . Bachelor Survivor!” The 50 guests for the evening reacted to this news with mixed reviews. A few guys and gals pumped their fists. Others cried out, “Yes!” “All right!” “It’s about time!” “Woo hoo!” There were some who seemed puzzled and wondered what in the heck that meant . . . Bachelor Survivor? Others looked like the rug had been pulled out from under them. “Is this a joke?” “What lousy timing. I’ve waited to be a Bachelorette all these years and now they are putting in this new twist!” “Golly! I’m no athlete!” “Does this mean we’re going to have to eat bugs?” “Uh, oh! I hope I get to keep all of those clothes I just spent a fortune on! I don’t want to go through the next 6 weeks in this evening gown!” Charlie exchanged looks with Carrie, thinking, so this is what that Individual Immunity is all about! The cameras scanned the reactions as Chris gave everyone a chance to get over the initial shock. Then he continued, “Hey, not to worry! You’ll find that things won’t be too different from how they’ve been in the past. And, we won’t be taking away any of your clothes or other belongings,” Chris, threw in, having heard the comment about clothes. “However, we do have a few surprises in store for you, including some terrific prizes and great parting gifts!” The opportunity to win prizes seemed to go over pretty big. “I can’t emphasize enough that this is an important evening for all of you. Tonight is the night to mingle and get to know as many of the other Bachelors and Bachelorettes as you can. At the end of the evening, you will each have important decisions to make. Enjoy the Cocktail Party and I’ll see you all later!” Chris left smiling and the crowd jumped into the fray.

To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:28 pm

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Hooray!!

S&T, thanks for posting my intro's for me. I just got home, had to come read our story, and won't linger, as I've got to work tomorrow.

Spin & Marty ......... very clever! :-)

Looks like we've got some excellent
bachelors & bachelorettes this season! Off to a nice start!


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:29 pm

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Silver, glad you are back home! We've missed you! Lots more to come tomorrow! Get some rest and I'll do the same. Love you, S&T


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:30 pm

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YOU GOT IT!!!


Good night, all!
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:30 pm

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Great start ladies. This is an
interesting concept, and I am so looking forward to seeing how this one
unfolds! Thanks to all of you for sharing your time and talents.

Spin and Marty? Hmmm, where have I heard that before? :o)
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:31 pm

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Awww, thanks USN! Love you,
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Earlier in the evening, Sam and Amelia, who had been the first couple out of the limos had joked with each other and the other couples who, two by two, had followed them into the Mansion. “It’s beginning to look a bit like Noah’s Ark, wouldn’t you say?” Sam laughed in Amelia’s ear. “Yes and the couples keep coming and in all shapes and sizes! I wonder what ABC is up to with this huge cast of characters?” “We’ll find out soon!” “That’s true!” When Chris gave his announcement that explained the reason for the huge cast, Sam winked at Amelia and she winked back. They were both lively and fun and already felt a bond. After the announcement, they gave each other a hug and a “Good Luck,” as they each set out to make some new friends.

After a brief conversation that revealed that Cliff and Emily really didn’t have much in common. He was a 6’4” surfer with little aspirations beyond life as a beach bum and a generous allowance from “dear, old dad,” while 5’2” Emily was driven by a rising career as a gymnastics coach, hoping to one day take her team to Olympic trials. With no real chemistry or joint interests, the two decided to part ways and mingle with the rest of the crowd.

To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:32 pm

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Carrie and Charlie talked briefly after Chris’ announcements. “We sure don’t want anyone to know about our Individual Immunity status,” Charlie, who was a big Survivor fan, told Carrie, who also happened to be a fan of the show. “Oh, I’ve already got that figured out. We don’t need any targets on our backs.” “You’re right there! How about we form the first “alliance” of Bachelor Survivor? “I’ll watch your back, if you’ll watch mine. It’s perfect! You can get to know the girls and I’ll find out about the guys. Deal?” Charlie asked, holding out his hand. Carrie shook it, “Deal!” “Now, let’s circulate and meet as many people as we can!”

To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:33 pm

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After searching for her all over the Mansion, Johnny finally found the girl in the blue dress. She was standing on the deck, looking out at the wooded hillside. When he approached, she said, “Ssh!” He froze. She pointed to the woods and put her other hand to her mouth as a signal not to talk. Johnny slowly stepped forward and stood beside this fairy tale beautiful girl. Then he heard it. An interesting sound from the forest. The sound repeated several times and he listened carefully. “An Otocoris alpestris?” he whispered in amazement. She nodded. “Exactly! An Otocoris alpestris . . . also known as a Horned Lark . . . very rare in Southern California. You have a good ear.” Faith said, looking at the man at her side. He was cute! She asked, “Was that a lucky guess or are you a kindred spirit?” “Definitely, a kindred spirit! My name’s Johnny and I’ve been watching birds since I was about four-years old. My grandfather got me started.” “Hi Johnny, I’m Faith. Both of my parents were into birds, so I’ve always been a nature girl.”


To Be Continued . . .


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Spin and Marty had experienced an instant attraction and connection. They laughed over their names. Marty was really ”Martha,” but she had always been a Tom Boy and much preferred her nickname to the given name she considered too old-fashioned and prissy sounding. Spin said he totally understood. His real name was Sylvester Paul Innis Nolan. He had been dubbed SPIN by his older brother and, over the years, the acronym became accepted as his name. In addition to their unusual names, Spin and Marty discovered they both had a love of history. Spin worked as a History professor at Rutger’s College in New Jersey. Marty was an auction consultant at Sotheby’s in New York City. They were pleased to learn that they were virtual neighbors in the scheme of things. The couple started circulating together among the other Bachelors and Bachelorettes until they gradually drifted away from each other, attracted to different conversations and personalities.


To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:34 pm

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Amy thought that the guy with the Beatle haircut was cute, but she didn’t know how to approach him. She watched the other Bachelors and Bachelorettes milling around with ease and joking with each other, but that wasn’t her style. She just needed an introduction and then she’d be fine. She approached the spread in the dining room, deciding that she might as well have something to eat, since she didn’t quite know how to mingle. Suddenly a guy was at her side, reaching for several cheeseburger sliders. “Hey, have you tried these?” he asked. “They’re really good!” Amy looked up and almost couldn’t get out a reply. It was the Beatle guy! She took a deep breath and plunged in, “No, I haven’t had a chance to try anything yet, but I love cheeseburgers.” She put one on her plate. “Any other recommendations?” she asked calmly, while inside her head, she was screaming “YES!!!”

To Be Continued . . .


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Brad and Mehreen hit it off with several other couples and enjoyed spending a large part of the evening together in the central living room of the mansion, meeting many Bachelors and Bachelorettes who lingered while drifting around the first floor of the mansion. Brad had a witty way with words that made him instantly popular. His handsome, dark face lit up when he told a story. “I hope our digs on this show are better than my college dorm. My roommate and I had the equivalent of an attic room on the top floor, complete with natural air conditioning all winter long.” He joked. “Actually, it wasn’t so bad. We had heat all summer, you know!” Mehreen was friendly but with a restrained dignity. Her long dark hair fell over her tanned shoulders. In her aqua evening gown with exquisite gold and silver beadwork, she looked like a modern-day Princess Jasmine straight out of Aladdin’s tale. Emily came to join her part way through the evening. “So what do you do?” asked Emily. “I’m a Fourth Grade teacher.” Mehreen replied. “No way! I’m a gymnastics coach and I work with lots of Fourth Grade girls!” Emily exclaimed. They chatted away about their students and special moments as a teacher. By the end of the discussion, they decided to room together if they both stayed.

To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:36 pm

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Jennarosa, Penina, Troy, and Corey became an instant foursome. They brought fun and a party atmosphere into every room they entered. When they reached the kitchen, the girls poked around in the fridge so see if there was anything good to nibble on. Since all of them had been too excited about the evening to eat earlier, they were now starving. They found dozens of eggs, along with a variety of cheeses and veggies, so, they decided to make some Western Omelets. Soon the savory aroma began attracting other Bachelors and Bachelorettes to the room. Jenny and Penny, as they were known by their closest friends, were happy to become short order cooks and kept turning out the omelets with Troy and Corey acting as sous chefs, chopping up peppers and onions and grating cheese. Joe joined them in the middle of the cooking. He was a chef at the famous Miami Heat restaurant and improvised a spicier version of the omelet for those who could take some “heat.” Through their genuine hospitality and willingness to serve the others, Jennarosa, Penina, Troy, and Corey soon became the most popular foursome in the house.

To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:37 pm

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Lindsey was standing by the pool, when she sensed a rather tall presence arriving by her side. “That water looks good!” he said. “Would you like a glass of wine?” “Thank you,” said Lindsey. “I decided I’d pick up an extra glass and offer it to the next pretty Bachelorette I saw.” Lindsey felt her face begin to flush. She had one of those complexions that betrayed her embarrassment, but she was determined that this experience on The Bachelor was going to be different. “Thanks!” she said. “I love the water, too! I’m Lindsey and I’m from Boca Raton, Florida.” “Boca Raton! Some good surfing there!” Cliff replied. “Lindsey, nice to meet you. I’m Cliff. I love to surf and I’m a California boy from the Laguna Beach area.” “Laguna Beach!” cried Lindsey. “I loved that show when I was younger.” Cliff laughed. “Actually, my older brother was in an episode a long time ago. He was at one of the parties.” Lindsey laughed. “Oh, my, a celebrity!” She took several slow sips of the white wine. It was delicious. Then she restarted the conversation. “Regarding water, I was on my high school swim and diving teams and I lifeguarded as a summer job through college. Now I’m an Oceanographer.” “That’s cool!” said Cliff.


To Be Continued . . .


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Paul and Mary found a love seat by a fireplace and only had eyes for each other. “Tell me what you’ve been doing since graduation,” Paul said. Mary smiled and arranged the cushion behind her for a good chat with an old friend, “Well, I moved back home to Kansas at first and got a job with the Chamber of Commerce. After a couple of years, I was offered a position as an aide to our Congressman in Topeka. When an opportunity came to work for the Governor, I took it. Through the Governor, I met State Senator Sam Brownback and when he offered me a position in Washington, D.C., I was thrilled. I accepted and moved to Bethesda, Maryland about a year ago. I love working in the
Capitol building.” “Geez, straight to the top! Mary, I’m so proud of you. I know you've always loved politics. I’m really impressed at your accomplishments.” His face radiated with adoration for the beautiful girl at his side. He sucked in his breath before asking, “But has there been a special guy?” he asked, with a mixture of hope and fear in his eyes. “Well, I’ve dated a few guys along the way, of course, some for as long as a year, but I wouldn’t be here if I had truly found someone, would I?” “No,” Paul’s face broke into a huge grin, “I guess you wouldn’t! And neither would I!” Paul then filled Mary in on his life since college. He had worked as a Chemical Engineer for Proctor and Gamble in Cincinnati for 6 years and then had been relocated to their Baltimore plant. “Baltimore? You mean, we both live in Maryland?” Mary laughed. “Yes,” Paul nodded, taking advantage of the moment to steal a kiss from the woman who he now knew was the love of his life. Mary had no complaints. The insecurities and unsure futures that had driven this couple apart were now a thing of the past and they both knew that Bachelor Survivor had already worked its magic for them.


To Be Continued . . .


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:39 pm

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S&T and gang, i love the idea of starting with an equal number of Bachs and Ettes and am interested to see how your concept plays out. Since Survivor has had more successful pairings than The Bachelor franchise, especially since the recent breakups, combining the two should work out much better than the present way!


You are such prolific writers!
And I remember Spin and Marty too!


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:41 pm

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The cocktail party was well under way; everybody seemed to getting to know one other, there was much laughter, little groups of couples sharing information about each other. This was just what Bachelor Survivor was all about! Ross and Renee could be heard strumming and picking songs, singing to anyone interested in hearing this twosome enjoying their talents. Steve who was a computer geek but a very outgoing type of guy was from Kansas; he had his own small business hoping to someday become the next Bill Gates. Kathleen, who he arrived with was from Washington D.C. and was a political speech writer. As they got to know one another, they decided to part and meet the others. Mark, from Montana was a rancher who had a buffalo ranch. He found out that Marlee was a equestrian who trained and showed Tennessee Walkers. He was very impressed that she was a national champion. He could tell that she had a great love for these beautiful animals. Mary-Margaret could not leave Brian's side! So shy and insecure, Brian was attempting to encourage her to mingle, but he knew she was overwhelmed about there being so many people. He knew he needed to move around, but being the gentleman, he made every effort to include her in his chats. He noticed another guy who seemed to have some difficulty mingling, taking Mary-Margaret's hand, he headed over to the guy. "Hi, I'm Brian and this is my date for the evening, Mary-Margaret," extending his hand to Walter for a handshake. "I'm Walter.....ah" as he looked at Mary Margaret. "You knows guys, we are suppose to get to know one another, Walter, if you don't mind, I'm going to leave Mary-Margaret with you for a while so I can meet a few people as expected of us. I picked you because I felt you would take care of this young lady, how about it you two?" "Ah, I'll be glad to, Brian" "Good", Brian takes Mary-Margaret hand and places it in Walter's and turns to leave, he eyes on one particular person. As he leaves, he hears Mary-Margaret introduce herself as "M". While talking, Walter finds out that "M" is an Executive Secretary who works for a famous wine-maker, Jesse Jacobi; the name seems familiar. Jackson, the basketball player, after walking around, meeting and greeting others sees a tall beauty he immediately knows he has get to know. He heads towards Mimi interested in getting to know her. "Wow", he thinks, smiling, "Someone I don't have to pick up to kiss!" Meanwhile, Lucy-Lyn is doing everything to get noticed. Flirty, obnoxious in flaunting, in her skimpy dress obviously she's bra-less . She is there for one reason and that is to call attention to herself. Around her, some guys seemed interested, others look at her and walk always. Lucy-Lyn is also looking for someone; she's eager to do some serious talking.

To be continued


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Post by SmartandTruthful on Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:43 pm

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Thank you Dreamweaver (great name)! We love to write and hope you will continue to enjoy our story. Yes, the odds of 25 to 25 seem a bit more likely to promote romance!
Have a great day, S&T

All right, Mackey!



Sadly, Walter had spent most of the night standing next to a potted palm tree and checking it for dry rot. That is, he stood next to the plant when he wasn’t hiding behind it! It was a real shame, since Walter was a truly nice guy with a great job at Apple computers headquarters. He just didn’t have any confidence when it came to women. His cousin, Sarah, had sent in an application for him, then dared him to come on the show and had coached him on “small talk,” but now that he was here, his nervousness had taken over and he felt like he was breaking out in hives. Now, as he turned his attention to Mary-Margaret for the first time that evening he felt comfortable. He liked the idea of "taking care of the little lady" as Brian had asked. It implied that he was trusted to help out someone else. As he looked into Mary-Margaret's eyes, Walter found his tongue loosen. "I'm Walter, M, and you have beautiful eyes."


To Be Continued . . .
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Post by SmartandTruthful on Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:58 am

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Chatter, laughter, and lots of talking was happening at the Bachelor/Bachelorette Mansion. The party was in full swing! Suddenly, who should appear in the room is Chris Harrison
with a most beautiful woman at his side. Wearing a pink gown, glowing with crystal sparkles around her bodice, she is a true beauty. Smiling at one another, you could tell these two were in love. "Who's she? What's Chris doing here? What's up?" were the questions on many minds. Chris, in his usual manner, taps his wine glass and says, "Folks I'd like for you to meet my wife," he smiles at her with love in his eyes. "We're an "old married couple you might say, so we thought we would offer our expertise as to what love, marriage is all about. We will be mingling with you all tonight and if any of you have any questions as to relationships, expectations, etc., we're here to give you our advice, for as you know his show is about finding the love of your life, a soul mate, a partner. So, as we get to know you, ask away about any subject; let the party continue." He smiles and they join in the crowd. Two people have their eyes on Chris. They each need to talk with him alone. They will be making their way towards him. Chris is aware of both; he's there for a reason also.



......To be continued


S&T, Travy, Chip, Silver....I will be continuing this later today sometime. I need to get my thoughts and ducks in a row! Lub, Mackey


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Mackey,
Sounds intriguing! Can't wait to see what you cook up! This really is a great way to fill the hours until Ali's finale! Love you, S&T


NOTE TO READERS: Of course, since this story was written three years ago, Chris and his wife were still happily married – so let’s just pretend we don’t know that they are now divorced.

Greg kept an eye on Marsha and enjoyed the ridiculous antics she pulled off over the course of the evening. She definitely tried to make an impression on the handsomest guys in the house, but she had little success. He saw her interrupt perfectly good conversations, insisting that it was “her” turn to talk to a certain Bachelor. She tried to sit on Paul’s lap, right in front of Mary. About midway through the evening, she whipped off her dress, revealing a bright blue bikini and a fit body, and pranced through the house,saying that is was so hot, she was going for a swim. “Anyone want to join me?” she asked, over and over. Her stunt gained Marsha lots of looks, but no one took her up on the offer. No one wanted to be “that guy” who jumped in the pool the first night. On top of that no one wanted to be the guy who jumped in the pool with “that girl!”

To Be Continued . . .


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Note to all: Forgive me if I get names mixed up from time to time (that happens to me when I'm writing; I tend to get ahead of myself sometimes. I may have gotten two of my girls mixed up-Mary-Margaret and Marlee. Mary-Margaret, who is now "M" is my shy one and Marlee is my girl from Kentucky. Sorry about that! Thanks also to all who have commented about our story. S&T is our guide; we hold her responsible for all our mistakes and we will take credit for all the praises!!! Just kidding, I love my S&T; she's like a big
sister. A brilliant writer, she's the one that comes up with all the story lines, the beautiful places we visit; she's our backbone, I know I speak
for all the others, we couldn't do this without her. She knows how much I lub her, my BFITWWW!!


That said, I continue with my story.........

The mansion was all abuzz. Several bachelors and bachelorettes had taken Chris and his wife, Gwen, up on their offer for relationship advice. They learned that Chris and Gwen
were high school sweethearts and has been married since 1993 with two terrific children. Most questions had to do with how they knew they were in love; how they handled disagreements, and many were just curious as to why the Bachelor/Bachelorette had few successes. Of course, Chris, being the ultimate host had the right answer for that; "love is never a guarantee, but once it truly happens, it's lasting!"


Lucy-Lyn finally made her way to Chris who happened to be alone enjoying watching the group who had gathered at the mansion. Slithering up to Chris, Lucy-Lyn bats her false eyelashes at Chris and asks, "So, you got my message?" Looking directly at her, Chris replies, "Yes". "And you have the package?" "Yes" "Will it be where we agreed it would be, and you will be there in case it isn't what I asked for?" "Yes to both Lucy-Lyn, and I can assure you, you will be getting just what you, let's say, ask for!, Chris says with just a hint of disgust. He turns and walks away, returning to Gwen. Quietly, he tells her it's all set and the end will be over soon.

Over in another corner, Brian is noticing that Walter and 'M" are just not working out. It seems that they both have their heads in the dried up plant that happens to be fake anyway. "What am I going to do with this girl?" he's asking himself. She's such a Cutie and she is so smart, there has got to be someone here for her; I'll just have to keep looking. He has taken it upon himself to find a guy for this special girl. He was thinking, If only I could have the time, if only this was under different circumstances, I wouldn't mind getting to know her. Not aware that Chris is seeing what is going on, Chris says to Gwen, "You know I just might have to find a way for our friend Brian to continue on this journey. I see a young lady that just may be what our friend needs." "Now don't go match-making, darling" Gwen replies, “Leave that up to them to find each other" "I will, but maybe, just maybe I can help things along?" he smiles as he looks at his beautiful wife.

Lucy-Lyn sees Brain and heads for him. "Well, hi there handsome, why haven't I met you before now." "Brain looks at her, flashes her his handsome smile and says, "Honey, I've been right here just waiting for you to come to me! Come on, let's dance" He takes her in his arms and begins a slow dance


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Several of the other couples see that Brian and Lucy-Lyn are dancing; they too join in. "M" sees Brian and Lucy-Lyn dancing; she's crushed. "Excuse me, Walter, I've got to ah...ah...go...ah find the lady's room, she rushes off.

As the dancing and conversation continues, Chris slips away into a living room off from the main room; it's away from the noise of the party. He gets his package and whispers "I'm ready". At the same time, Brian turns to a couple next to them and says, "Hi, let's change partners," he takes the other lady in his arms and slowly dances off. When the song is over, he leaves. After spending some time in the lady's room, "M" comes back looking for Brian. She knows she needs to meet others, but she felt so comfortable being with Brian and just looking at him and hearing his voice, makes her heart skip beats, it's a feeling she has never felt before. She finds a seat, looks around, and notices that Lucy-Lyn isn't around either, she keeps looking. She then realizes that Brian and Lucy-Lyn have left together. She wants to go home, tears are in her eyes, so she pretends to get interested in the beautiful picture on the wall.

Down the hall Lucy-Lyn is approaching the living room, this is what she's been waiting for, her ticket out of here. She can now catch the first plane to Cancun and live a life of luxury. She has been waiting for this day for 6 months, she's finally gotten what she always wanted, always needed, freedom, freedom to do as she pleases whenever she pleases, she's looking for a sugar-daddy. She knows a pilot who had caught her eye; she heard he just broke up with his girlfriend; he's probably needing a shoulder to cry on and she's got the shoulder.


She opens the door and walks in. Standing waiting for her is Chris with the red suitcase in his hand, just the color she asked for, it matches her luggage. She smiles and approaches Chris, "Open it and let's count the money, honey". Chris does as she says. "You have them in 20s, 50's and 100s, correctly, Chris?" she asks. "Yes, count them for yourself." She picks up a few packs, sees there are 100s, checks a few others and smiles slyly, "Looks like it just what I need". Chris closes the case, picks it up and says, "Okay Lucy-Lyn it's the 1/2 million you demanded, here, take and it and I never want to hear from you again." He reaches out the suitcase to her, Lucy-Lyn begins to take it. Just as it exchanges hands, Brian steps out and walks up to Lucy-Lyn. "Lucy-Lyn, you have the right to remain silent....."What, what is this, what are you doing, take your hands off me." Brian finishes, and shows Lucy-Lyn his badge, other's come and take her away. The extortion is over, Lucy-Lyn is under arrest and Chris's nightmare is over.


For 6 months Lucy-Lyn has been stalking Chris claiming that she has a video of him with another woman who is not his wife. Chris knows this is not true as does Gwen. Any video she may have is not of him. He contacted his friend of many years Brian who set up this "sting" operation. It seemed Lucy-Lyn had been doing this for many years to other people only those people had actually cheated on their spouses, but not this time, this time Lucy-Lyn will not get the freedom she was looking for.


.....To be continued


Okay S&T, Travy, Silver and Chip, I'm finished. Lub you all, Mackey


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